Reviews For The Day I Fall
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Reviewer: marie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/22/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 11

i absolutely love this story! please updayte soon...

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/08 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 11

I read this before you took it down and decided to put it back up again, bu I reread everything already and I LOVE it Kelly! It's the kind of plot that very easily could go down that fluffy Mary Sue kinda route, but just the way you write it makes me go AWW.... I just want to hug both of them and ugh can I kill Brian? He's SUCH an asshole in this story! I really hope that Rachel can let Nick into her life on a deeper level. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/08 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 11

Can't wait to see what happens. I hope Nick is ok.

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/08 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 11

Oye vey! You always leave off right when I get majorly hooked again! Lol. I think I've read up until the next part - not quite sure. But I do remember, like, one more thing at least that happens that hasn't happened yet, so, yeah...lol. :)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story always makes me SO happy!!!! :D

~Lenni~ 

Reviewer: Sakabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/08 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 11

I want to say that I hope Rachel reconsiders the relationship thing, but I'm not sure that's the best idea. I mean, maybe in the future they can get together, but right now Nick (and her as well..) is going through a lot shit and I think that would just over complicate things. Still, I really hope that he calls her back. Maybe now that she understands what Nick's love life has been like she can help him a little better, and also possibly open up to him as well. I'm not sure if that made much sense but I'm running on a lack of sleep and caffeine at the moment lol. Fabulous chapter, Kelly :) I'd tell you that I adore your writing, but I think you already know that :P