Date: 05/25/08 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: The world is mine
hehe loved it
Author's Response: you are welcome with lots of hugs here!!!
Date: 05/25/08 06:51 pm Title: Prologue... This-is-not-Ibiza (well it really is)
awsome beginning.
Author's Response: thank you for your comment. i just love when you take the time to show me support. THANK YOU!
Date: 05/17/08 05:25 am Title: Chapter 1: The world is mine
hum, a little easy, to easy. Take Care!
Author's Response: yes i know.rnstarting too fast. that´s the idea
Date: 05/17/08 05:20 am Title: Prologue... This-is-not-Ibiza (well it really is)
It looks like is going to be a great story.
Author's Response: thanks honey! you´re welcome
Date: 05/17/08 01:54 am Title: Chapter 1: The world is mine
Interesting start so far. She seems really wild but being a DJ and in the party environment I can see that. Only suggestion is that when characters are speaking you should put the lines in quotation marks like this " ". It makes it MUCH easier to read.
Author's Response: oh yes thank you for the idearni was struggling with html thoughrnrni really hope you like the story.
Date: 05/16/08 08:40 pm Title: Prologue... This-is-not-Ibiza (well it really is)
Awesome story so far, update soon.
Author's Response: Kim i´m so glad you enjoyed it!!!rnthanks a bunch
Date: 05/16/08 05:42 am Title: Prologue... This-is-not-Ibiza (well it really is)
this is a really great start.. update
Author's Response: thank you so much! my very first comment on this storyrnTHANK YOUUUUUUUUUU
