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Reviewer: AJsgirl021 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 03:47 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

love it!! This is AJsgirl saying goodbye and god bless!! Peace!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Sofdlovesbsb Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/08 06:20 pm Title: Slightly Off Schedule

That's great. I loved. It was a great read. Great Job. It was funny.

Author's Response: Thankies! :)

Reviewer: honey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 10:16 pm Title: Slightly Off Schedule

lol first of all AWWWWWWW! And second of all, I giggled everytime you said "washroom" hehe you and Julilly make me smile. And third of all Well done! I love that you used all five perspectives! I was going to try to do that as well. You have inspired me to try and go write mine today. And of course, last but not least..... My favorite part was Brian whining about losing to Nick at Mario Cart. the game rigged. hahahahha.

Author's Response: LOL is "washroom" a Canadian word? I didn't know that! I guess you learn something new everyday, eh? hehe. Yeah, I thought I would do all five because if I only did three I would have felt like two of them were left out :( Yay for inspiration! I hope you do write it today, so I have something to read when I get home! And Mario Kart is rigged! I swear! Hehe thanks so much Kelly! :)

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 12:00 pm Title: Slightly Off Schedule

Haha, I really enjoyed this!! It's so funny because I was determined to NOT read any of the challenge stories until I completed and posted my own, and I'm glad to say that I kept true to my word. But after posting it and coming here to read the very first posted challenge story, I realize that your story and my story has some things in common, from the words that were used, to some of the descriptions. Pretty freaky, but great minds think alike. =P Great job Saka!!

Author's Response: Aw really? I guess you and I are just awesome like that ;) I'll have to go read yours now! Thanks hun!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 11:50 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

Aaah i love it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Tantilisinteaser Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 11:05 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

I loved it. I could actually see that happening, I would love to know the actual story behind the piccie and whether Kevin was the one who took the picture.

Author's Response: LOL You and I both, girlie! Thanks a bunch!

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 08:28 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

that was good :)



Author's Response: Thankies :)

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 06:14 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

haha....good one!  Love the pic :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: BSBSavedMyLife Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 04:35 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

LMAO! That was absolutely adorable! What a great way to tell the story of the picture! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks hun!

Reviewer: fracktrain Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 03:40 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

good story

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Howies Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 02:52 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

Love the story and i love hw it ties to the pic awsome i hope to see more from you.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was actually a challenge on the forums to write a story that ties in with this picture :)

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 02:32 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

Great job on the challenge...I lurve it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks girlie!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 02:28 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

Yay!! That was so much fun. Great job with the challenge! I know the different pov's was hard for everyone but you did awesome. The story was very funny and I can picture it all going down. =)

Author's Response: Thanks Luna! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) I love writing the challenges, they're always so fun!

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/08 02:18 am Title: Slightly Off Schedule

Aww very well done! You did a great job not only writing in first person but capturing their personalities as well. I know I didn't let you guys write a really long story but for the small snippets you did an excellent job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Mare! I'm glad you thought I did a good job of writing in first person because I usually have a lot of difficulty with that. So yay!