Date: 10/19/09 06:26 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
Please update soon! Love this story...
Date: 10/08/09 12:09 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
Great chapter...keep it coming!
Date: 09/02/09 07:22 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
I don't know what to say, i'm lost for words...but that's because it was so beautiful! Thanks for the update, I hope to see a couple of more soon ;)
Date: 07/16/09 03:16 am Title: When it all comes crashing down
OMG!!
OMG!!
I just LOVE to see Nick vulnerable like that u know? don't get me wrong I love the tough guy most of the time but to see him crying...it just strings my heart.Maybe 'cuz I've always thought that the REAL NICK is like that...tough and fragile all at once.
Date: 06/03/09 12:07 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one.
Date: 06/01/09 11:56 am Title: When it all comes crashing down
omg that was..amazing!
I'm not good at writting long reviews but wow that was intense.
Author's Response: Thanks hun, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 06/01/09 05:35 am Title: When it all comes crashing down
Oh and I forgot to add how I loved your usage of Masquerade! I love that song!!!
You wrote that chapter beautifully and I actually did have tears threatning to spill...
Date: 05/26/09 03:20 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
Here i am, eating icecream and reading your story haha ..
She made the right choice to go to Vegas :D
Date: 05/16/09 12:32 am Title: When it all comes crashing down
I know I got slammed with my last review of Addie...but I agree with Southern Sweetheart and I stand by what I said last time. Yes, she lost a baby..she's grieving BUT so is Nick. And her running to Nepal is NOT the way to go about it. I'm also with her when she said the got pissed when Addie said Mollie defined their relationship. If that's how she see it, then, like I said before, maybe Nick is better off without her. Nick has overcome a lot of his demons dealing with this and has showen great strides...Addie on the other hand, is going down a dark, dark, road. THAT is what therapy is about. They could go TOGETHER and work this out...TOGETHER. She's just too damn chickenshit to deal with it. I see the trip to Nepal as yet another way to avoid dealing with the situation. She can go down there, dive into her work and avoid the whole thing. I hardly believe its the best thing for them; it will only drive them farther apart..A year? Come on....
But, other than that, great chapter. Addie really does need a big dose of reality tho...but you write this beautifully. The angst is there and makes your heart just go out to them both. Well done!
Author's Response:
I didn't mean to slam you for disliking Adie in the last review. I dislike her a lot of the time too but people do strange things when death is involved.
You are completely right in what you said about her grieving, she has totally lost sight of Nick in a big way. But I think she is completely right in what she is trying to do because if she has lost sight of who she is, how can she be in a relationship? She is going away to try and figure that out.
Nick has completely done a 180 from the start of this story. There is a huge growth in him and in the next chapter he is going to do something huge, something that you will not be expecting (It's a good thing!) I think everyone will be really proud of him.
Thanks for the review hun. xxx
Date: 04/16/09 02:11 am Title: When it all comes crashing down
Wow, what a great chapter. I was wondering there for awhile is Adie was going to Nick, or away from him. I'm so happy that she did but I have a feeling its not going to be the welcome she wanted. and Nick, to be thinking about custody at the end :-/ I can't wait for more!
Date: 03/31/09 06:48 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
Cool new banner! whered you get that picture of lauren and nick? its super cute! mucho glad he is with someone who isnt glamourous 24/7. good for him if it makes him happy.
Author's Response: I am too. They always seem to look content with eachother in the piccies I have seen, I am sick of people saying she's not pretty, she's too fat to be with him. At the end of the day I don't think they would like it said about them and he has chosen to be with her. It's just people bing stupid, immature, jealous brats!
Date: 01/15/09 01:22 am Title: When it all comes crashing down
yeah she needs to give him a chance for herself and her baby. taking the risk so her daughter can have a chance at having the loving home. can't wait to see where this goes. she knows. ahh. I feel like id be the rachel in this story. furious!
Date: 01/14/09 11:45 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
love this story. i just wish Adie would take Nick back. i'm almost in tears (of frustration really lol) when i'm reading the latest chapter, when Adie has an argument with Rachel and AJ is talking with her. i can't wait to read on and see what becomes of Adie and Nick. :) keep up the great work!
Date: 12/10/08 06:50 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
oh no! ooh i like it so far. keep it goin! :D can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/08/08 08:20 pm Title: When it all comes crashing down
awww...i hope things will work out with Nick and Adie. love the story girl! keep it up! :)
Author's Response:
There is a lot more to this story then first meets the eye so keep on reading! Thanks for the review!
