Date: 06/07/08 08:28 pm Title: Going to the Chapel...
This is a great story, I'm loving it. Hope he comes to his senses before it's to late, wich I'm guessing he won't otherwise the story would end pretty soon,lol. Hope to read more soon; Take Care!
Author's Response: Yep it would be a bit of a quick story if I did that. There is lots of drama in this one!
Date: 06/06/08 11:10 pm Title: Going to the Chapel...
aw. loved the kevin and addie moment. haha. and her and her sister in the toilet hahaha. cant wait for more!
Author's Response: When I was maid of honour for my friend we had lots of tiolet moments like that! But by the end of the night both of us were a bit tipsy and it became quiet a challenge so I just had to add it! I thought the Kevin and Adie scene was good and it is going to come in to play more a bit later in the story!
Date: 06/06/08 11:04 pm Title: Going to the Chapel...
OK...the beginning of this chapter is excellent, definitely kept me guessing. I love that you started with Adie leaving, then this chapter really kind of begins telling the story of why she left. I can't wait to read more, great job!
Author's Response: I wasn't sure if the beginning was going to work well with this chapter following but I'm glad to see that it has. There is going to be a few chapters explaining why she left, you need a bit of back story with this one but the main chucnk of the story is going to be what happens after she leaves. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/06/08 08:33 pm Title: Going to the Chapel...
great chapter... alittle confusing at first but it was all good. cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Originally this was going to be the start but then I added the prologue. It was supposed to make you think that they were the ones getting married but I decided that the openeing needed to be a bit more dramatic!rnrnThanks for the review!
