Date: 08/05/08 12:51 am Title: A few home truths
I just found this story on here and I gotta say Wow! It's really good.
It's nice to read such a well written, deep character driven piece of FF.
I gotta say, I like your portrayal of Nick too, a good guy with some issues.
I really like the direction of the story so far and cant wait to see what happens next.
Ebony
Author's Response: Thanks Hon. I didn't want there to be an out and out villan in this story because I don't think either of them are bad people, they just both have issues that they are not sharing with each other that's all! It's very complex and there is no right or wrong, keep on reading to see where it goes!
Date: 08/04/08 04:10 pm Title: A few home truths
Oooh I really am enjoying this story! There's so many issues going on in their relationship. Talk about complex! I love how they are both a little bit at fault here. Nick REALLY should trust Adie enough after 3 years to be more open w/ her, but Adie also shouldn't be putting so much pressure on Nick. Can't wait to see where this ties into the beginning of the story and what happens after that.
Author's Response: Well I didn't just want one person to be at fault, because very rarely is that true to life, both parties usually do something wrong. Nick definetly needs to open up more to her, maybe then she would understand his decisions and thoughts more. She just needs to realsie that he has been so hurt in the past when he has trusted people that he is very gaurded, unfourtunetly they are both stubborn and it is going to cause a lot of problems for them. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/04/08 07:32 am Title: A few home truths
This was a pretty nice hcapter. I'm really glad they finally talked about everything tha was going on, well, they didn't really talkedm they fought,lol. Hope they can mend everything before is to late. Can't wait to read another chapter; Take care!
Author's Response: At least it is all out in the open now though! Not that it's going to really change anything! Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/03/08 08:12 pm Title: A few home truths
Great update! Not exactly the happiest chapter, but an important one because it gives insight to why she left...I love that you set up the story with us knowing she is gone, gives a different perspective when reading! Update soon! Good stuff!
Author's Response: It's an important chapter all right and I have to say that things are only going to get worse but you guys already know that! He isn't going to see it coming though and the aftermarth is going to play an even bigger part to this story! Thanks for the update!
Date: 08/03/08 04:53 pm Title: A few home truths
aw. that was a huge fight. but ya she does need to see where he is coming from and then again so does he. its the compromise issue. they both make valid points. she needs to relax a lil and he needs to open up some. hmm. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Yep they both need to learn to comprimise, hence the bettle scene in the last chapter! That was only over a car this is do to with the rest of their lives together! She definetly needs to chill out and realise that she can't keep pushing the situation, it's only going to make Nick retreat further into himself. Nick needs to learn her can trust her though, he definetly needs to open up and explain to her why he is like he is. Thanks for the review! Keep them coming!
