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Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/08 09:57 am Title: Daddy's eyes

so, this story was suggested to me by a reader on here. I am super glad now. I am really enjoying it. I have to admit that Adie really gets under my skin at times, but you can't help byt feel for her. I didn't want to comment after every chapter so that was for chapters 1-25......

 

Now for chapter 26. I had a feeling that Nick was going to hand over his journals to Adie. I am excited to see how that turns out....However the big event in this chapter was Nick walking in on the sonogram.....I really want to know what he is thinking and I hate how you left such a cliffhanger. I really hope he doesn't like totally spaz out and leave Adie there in the room alone. I really hope he is amazed by the sight of his child on the screen and cries or something....so that Adie can see some freaking emotion from him....

 

I am adding this to my favs, so please update soon.



Author's Response:

Who recommended me? I'm intrigued. I'm glad that people think this story is good enough to tell others about it and I am really glad you were not dispointed.

Adie gets under a lot of peoples skins including her own! LOL! She has lots of issues that unlike Nick she hasn't really gotten to grips with yet, Nick knows his are there but she...well I think she has hidden them but eventually they will al catch up with her and it is going to be a lot sooner then she wants. 

I have a feeling you will be quite happy with Nick's reaction but probably not Adie's! It's almost as if the tables have turned!

Thanks for the fave's add and for the review! Keep em coming!

Reviewer: ALM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/08 12:13 pm Title: Daddy's eyes

WOW really good chapter but again is was left in cliffhanger WHY x lookin forward so how Nick reacts i think he gonna be hurt more then anything x in a good note really happy that the baby OK

Author's Response: I think you are right about him being hurt. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/08 04:49 am Title: Daddy's eyes

I say it again, you are evil,lol. Another cliffhanger, noooo. Well, atleast we know the baby is ok, and if you say we're going to be surprised by Nick's behavior, then I guess he'll be ok with the baby, but still, evil, jejeje. Pleaseeee update soon, can't wait for an update. Take Care!



Author's Response: You might be sursprised but a lot is going to go down in the next chapter! LOL! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lynzer4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/08 04:27 am Title: Daddy's eyes

You end it there.... I need to know how Nick reacts.... PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response: I know I am so evil! LOL! Shouldn't be too long until you find out!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/08 02:51 am Title: Daddy's eyes

OMFG!!!! more soon!!! I can't believe they let him walk right in without knocking!

Author's Response: Well she would have been able to hide it all if he had been able to knock! LOL!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/08 09:46 pm Title: Daddy's eyes

You are in SO much trouble you have no idea...thanks for letting us know that he knows...and then, a cliffie like that?  YOU ARE EVIL!  I hope you are off for the next many days so you can be writing :o)...

On a more serious note, I like the way you let it out, and how Nick is just kind of tooting along, feeling positive...I guess you forget things like who your person to contact in case of emergencies is...anyways, great chapter, even though you had an evil ending!  I can't wait for more more more!  Hugs!

Author's Response:

EVIL is my middle name! LOL! I was having huge dilemas about the past two chapters, originally it was supposed to be just one but I didn't want you guys to find out that she didn't loose the baby right away, the only problem was that it made the next chapter quite short. I think I got the point across though and I am really happy with how it turned out. Leaves you all wanting more! LOL!

With regards to how he found out: it just seemed the right way to go because her telling him would have just been so boring, it needed to be shocking and it needed to be completly unexpected for him. Hopefully the next chapter should be up by Friday! Hugs right back at ya! You need to get your hiney in update mode too!!!!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/08 08:48 pm Title: Daddy's eyes

ahh. my exact thought was for him to give her the diaries too. omg. i cant believe thats how he found out. ahhh. i cant wait to see how he reacts. I wish it wouldnt be as bad as we are all expecting it to be..cant wait for more!

Author's Response: The diaries will play a huge part down the road but I think right now that thought will be completely lost on Nick as he tries to process what he has just found out. There was really no other way in which he could find out really, it had to be a shocking revealation and it makes for good reading. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Southern_Sweetheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/08 08:26 pm Title: Daddy's eyes

Okay lets try this again....

I'm glad he knows. I can't wait to see how it goes and how she explains herself.

I wonder what is going through his mind though when he sees the baby on the screen.

Update soon please! I'm on the end of my seat waiting!

Author's Response: I think ge is just going to be in pure shock and she is going to have a hell of a lot of explaining to do that is for sure! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Southern_Sweetheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/15/08 08:24 pm Title: Daddy's eyes

Wooo-hooo an update!

I'm glad the baby is okay but dun dun dun he' knows

Author's Response: I know and now is when it is going to start to get interesting!