Date: 02/23/09 05:21 am Title: When it rains
Great chapter. For about a minute there I thought she was going to have an accident, thank God I was wrong. I hope they fix things now.
Author's Response: They might start to fix things but there is a long way to go!
Date: 01/30/09 03:12 am Title: When it rains
Wowza, action packed chapter with an evil cliffie of an ending, you are getting good at that. I can't wait for more...Nick's reaction, for them to really talk about some things - like what the journal said, the rest of the entries, her abortion, etc. I loved Angel's rant too...so true, and seeing a baby and all that, wow, just put it all into perspective for them. Great stuff, lady - update soon!!!
Author's Response:
I was just on a roll! It's amazing I finished my nights, came home and instead of sleeping for a few hours like I usually do I ended up cranking out the rest of the chapter! The next chappie is going to reveal a lot. You guys will hopefully understand Adie's decisions a lot better, you may actually start to like her!!!! LOL! I won't hold my breath!
The whole baby thing was soooooooooooooooo important and Rachel really only was pregnant in this story for that one scene and also another but that will be a lot later on! I don't want to give away too much! Seeing Nick with Max finally made Adie realise what she could be potentially giving up! Don't worry though this story is far from over and there is lots more drama to come! Thanks for the review! Now it would be your turn Darbs!!! HINT!!!
Date: 01/30/09 02:12 am Title: When it rains
All I can say is.....it is about DAMN time!!!!!
Update soon please! I deperately need to know what Nicks reaction is!!!
Author's Response: I thought you would be happy! LOL! I am just about to start the next chappy so it should't be too long! Thanks for the revie!
Date: 01/30/09 02:07 am Title: When it rains
*wipes tear from eye*
This was an amazing chapter!!! I loved it!!
I am so happy that she has finally realized that she needs him as much as he needs her. I thought the 'sugar puff' nickname was hilarious, that was a nice touch. I do have to say I was not expecting all of this stuff to happen in this chapter,but I'm not complaining!
I loved how you snuck Adie into the part where Nick was holding Max. That was a cute but gut wrenching moment. Most of all I love how you left us with another cliff hanger. This is by the far the peak of the story for me. I can't wait to see what you do with this. By the way are you ever going to tell us about her first pregnancy? I hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
You know what I didn't think all of this was going to happen either! I don't really plan my chapters out brilliantly I just sorta know what needs to happen and I tried really hard to spilt this so it was two but I just couldn't do it so you got the lot! Glad you lied the sugar puff nickname, I needed to show his softer side after his outburst and that was the best way of doing it, it also made Adie remember the times she had been trying so hard to repress!
I think it was important for Adie to see Nick with Max because it really hit home what her future could be like and it also demonstrated how Nick had grown up and how he does want everything with her. All will be revealed in the next chapter about everything to do with Adie. I was going to do it in a conversation with her sister but I thought it would be better for you guys to finally hear about it when she told Nick everything because his reaction is going to be important to the story.
PLease vote at the felix awards for me! Best cliffie catergory maybe?!
Date: 01/30/09 01:23 am Title: When it rains
awww i love it! "I want to come home" this made me think of something out of a movie. lol. great job. can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't sure whether to go with the whole cliched movie angle of her turning up after walking for ages in the rain with everything against her, but it just worked so well!
Date: 01/30/09 12:59 am Title: When it rains
I ,ove this chapter!! Can't wait for the next!!
Author's Response: Thanks hun! please vote for me at the felix awards if you love it so much!
Date: 01/30/09 12:25 am Title: When it rains
Well, it's ABOUT DAMN TIME she removed her head from her ass!
Author's Response: I love your comment! Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/29/09 11:22 pm Title: When it rains
ahhh i was just listening to when it rains by paramore and then read this. crazy. ooooooooomg. that chapter wa samazing. cant wait for more. i loved herline!
Author's Response: oOhh spooky!! LOL! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/29/09 10:40 pm Title: When it rains
OMG! More!!! Update! I want to know what Nick says in response!!!
Author's Response: all in good time! Thanks for review!
