Date: 03/07/09 03:22 am Title: Up all night
Great chapter. I loved how the theraphy worked out. And that part at the end, I loved it. Hope to read more soon; Take Care!
Author's Response: There will be more therpay sessions to follow and more aww scenes I promise. Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/04/09 06:52 am Title: Up all night
awe! I like the breakthrough with them in this chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: There will be lots more breakthroughs to come so stay tuned! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/03/09 11:23 pm Title: Up all night
amazing amazing amazing....I really like how you made Nicks character sensitve and open in the chapter! I also like Nicks reaction towards the baby moving!
Author's Response: I think it's importnat to show his sensitive side because it just proves how wrong Adie had ir. Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/03/09 08:10 pm Title: Up all night
I'm glad my little email gave you push you needed! I love the tenderness of the last part of this chapter, how Nick blurts out his fear and she follows with hers, then they tell each other the thing they love. I am interested to hear more after all of it is processed in therapy. The trust issue is going to be huge, lots of work on that front to come, I'm sure. The whole thing with Mark plays into that, good for Adie for admitting it, but she has concealed a whole part of herself from Nick and left a lot out. And, made Nick to feel like he was the bad guy. Can't wait for more, great job as always!
Author's Response: The trust issue is huge and it is going to come back and bite her in the ass! The next therapy session is going to focus on Nick and his issues so that should be interesting because he has some thoughts about how different her life was to his when really it wasn't. They are both going to have some major realisations about the other! Thanks for the review! Kisses
Date: 03/03/09 04:06 pm Title: Up all night
This is by far the best chapter you have written in this story!
It was full of raw emotion. I am so happy for the both of them, they are making so much progress. I am so glad that Adie finally opened up to him about some of her feelings and why she did what she did. I like how you kept writing Nick in when he would cut Adie off, that seems like something he would totally do.
My favorite part of this chapter is by far the ending. The way you wrote how they completed their "homework" was awesome. I absolutely adored the baby kicking scene and where Nick is wondering why his body is waking up at 3:30 in the morning,lol. The line where Nick stated "I'm too tired for sex, promise in the morning." was a nice touch definately funny!
I am so happy that they have both stated their fears and their love for each other. I can't wait to see what happens in their next therapy session; see what Nick has to say about everything including his past.
One quick thing..do you have a baby's name planned? If so when are you going to tell us what its going to be? Great update and hurry back with the next one!
Author's Response:
They are only going to get better after this! But Thanks for the huge compliment.
I wanted to portray Nick as being eager to know everything to the point where he got impatient because she couldn't tell him quick enough and I think it worked very well because in situations like that emotions do run high and people can get impatient. Nick's therapy session will be in about two chapters time but there will be lots revealed in that one!
I tend to have some of my most heartfelt but also difficult conversations late at night I'm not sure whether it is because you're both in bed and vunerable or because it's dark but it just works really well and I just had to use it for this story. Nick was telling her his fears but at the same time he didn't have to look at her and she couldn't see him that well to see how much he was hurting, it's like a protection mechanism.
Yes I do know what she is going to be named and you will also find that out within the next few chappies!
Thanks for the review!
