Date: 03/11/10 05:53 am Title: Babysitting
First off hello,
I am in love with this story. I love the way you describe Nick and Adie. I am trying to finish reading this... I usually don't read Nick stories But I do have a few and now I am adding your's to that list. I can't wait to finish reading what you have yet I don't want to cause I don't want to wait for the next update. haha, i know. Loving this. :)
Date: 03/14/09 07:11 am Title: Babysitting
Great chapter. It was so sweet of Nick to offer to babysit Max. He is going to be a great father. Please update soon. Take Care!
Author's Response: I thought we needed a nice chapter after all the crap they have been through. Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/09/09 11:23 pm Title: Babysitting
Okay this week I am leaving a short review because I am really really sick.
This was a good update. This chapter was well detailed and I love how you decided to write a chapter about them taking a baby home. They definately needed the experience. I hope that Adie doesn't hold all those dreams in because its just going to eat away at her and by her holding all that in she is taking steps back instead of forward.
Great update and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I hope you are feeling better hon! I hate feeling poorly!
It was important to show them both with a newborn because it made Nick more confident and it also made Adie realsie what a huge mistake she could have possibly made. That is going to play a bigger part later. Also there definetly needed to be more aww factor in this story because it has been a bit of a downer so far and there is more down stuff to come as well!
Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/09/09 08:05 pm Title: Babysitting
okay he was so great with max it was so cute how insecure he was. aaww.
rachels booby juice. haha
Author's Response: Well I though this story need a it of the cuteness factor! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/09/09 06:57 pm Title: Babysitting
aug! more soon!!!
Author's Response: Hopefully there should be another chapter by next week.
Date: 03/09/09 05:42 pm Title: Babysitting
Great update...I loved the beginning of this chapter and the way you wrote Nick observing. I also thought it was endearing how cautious he was with Max but how he did everything just right. Adie has some major insecurities that are definitely going to cause issues...and I think Nick's natural ability is going to make her even more insecure. I so can not wait for more, good job...and quick on the update, such a pleasant surprise!
Author's Response: It was definetly important for Adie to see how Nick was with Max and this is going to play a huge part in the next part of the story! She is waiting for things to fall apart and it is going to cause some major strain on their relationship! Thanks for the review Hunn, I'm hoping I will be able to return the favor later! xx
