Date: 03/29/09 01:51 pm Title: All I Have to Give
Hey i just started to read this story..and i love it! Keep up the good work, you're a good writer..
Author's Response: Im glad you like it. Please keep reviewing and lettin gme know what you think!
Date: 03/19/09 03:38 am Title: All I Have to Give
Great chapter. I'm glad he decided to talk and open up to her. That's really good progress. Please update soon; Take Care!
Author's Response: There will be more in the next chapter! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/17/09 06:01 pm Title: All I Have to Give
awe!! more soon!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks will try and update as soon as I can x
Date: 03/17/09 04:05 pm Title: All I Have to Give
Great chapter...I loved the painting scene...and how you conveyed how much even that him saying as little as he did about his parents' divorce and its impact on him. I really liked the end scene too, that Adie is finally seeing that just because Nick doesn't express his commitment to her with an engagement doesn't mean he isn't committed, I think he may actually change in that department. I still am ready for the whole mistrust of Adie to come blazing, she has betrayed his trust in a big way and it is just sitting there, ready to blow. Great update...more soon!
Author's Response:
Hey chicka! I read Casual and loved it, check out my review!
I think Adie has finally realised that being married is not the be all and end all, in actual fact it's all materialistic because a ring and piece of paper doesn't mean Nick loves her anymore. The thing that is getting to her the most is that fact that he hasn't given her back the ring that signified his heart and in her mind it signals that he doesn't trust her. There is going to be a scene in a few chapters about that!
Thanks hun your turn now!
Date: 03/17/09 03:55 pm Title: All I Have to Give
That was a quick update! I liked it!
I'm really happy that the two of them are making progress. Adie is more so making the attempt but Nick is slowly getting there. I know he has demons in his closet but one thing his character needs to realize is that in order to fully love someone you have to accept them no matter what and he doesn't see that Adie has accepted him. He still thinks that he isn't good enough, then again he probably is still scared, scared that she might leave him again.
I liked how you started to show some of nick's side in this chapter. I can't wait to see what else is going to happen with him. Its about time he got his part,lol.
I like how you added the scene where they went to pick the paint color, that was cute. Nick not allowing pink is a typical man, I'm glad that he chose purple...hanging out with Howie all those years paid off!
You're doing really well with updating on a regular basis now, I'm loving it! I hope that you have the time to continue to do that. Good luck and hurry back with the next update!
Author's Response:
I think Nick still is really scared that she is going to leave him again and he told her that a few chapters ago. He finds it difficult to trust and open up and as you saw in this chapter he doesn't believe Adie can understand where he is coming from because in his eyes he thinks her childhood was great. It was important for her to set him straight and I think finally he might start to understand that no one's life is easy.
Thanks for the review! Hope you are feeling better now x
