Date: 05/24/09 05:45 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
wow, emotionally charged chapter. It must be so hard to go through that. Take Care!
Author's Response: Thanks hun, glad I captured it right x
Date: 05/06/09 01:53 pm Title: Long Road To Ruin
Kinda hoping this is a major dream sequence and Nick will wake up from it. Man, just for ONCE can't there be a happy ending? Damn.
Author's Response: It would be one hell of a dream! Actually one hell of a nightmare. Thanks for the review x
Date: 05/06/09 03:14 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
OMG NOOO! Poor Addie and Nick! more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review x
Date: 05/06/09 03:04 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
I do hate this, but I'm sure you had your reasons. Such a sad chapter, and you did a beautiful job of writing it. one of my SILs actually went through this same thing, but at 38 weeks...such a horrible thing. Can't wait to see where this is going now! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks hun. It was a very difficult chapter to write but it serves a purpose for later in the story I promise. I can't imagine how hard it must be to have to go through it in real life, it must be awful. xx
Date: 05/06/09 02:16 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
Talk about gutwrenching!! I had tears in my eyes!! Great chapter! Can't wait till the next to see who Nick called...tho I have a good idea who...Hurry!!!!
Author's Response: You will have to let me know if you were right. xx
Date: 05/06/09 01:27 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
This chapter is heartbreaking. My heart goes out to them, I could never imagine how it feels to lose a baby. I don't know why you made this happen but I'm sure we'll find out soon enough.
I just hope that Adie doesn't close up and shut herself down from Nick and everyone else. She needs his support as much as Nick needs hers. I know it will take time but I hope everything works out.
Author's Response: There are going to be so many obstacles in their way and it is going to be a very bumby ride. This situation is going to test their relationship to the brink and the jury is still out on whether they will both make it to the otherside! Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/06/09 12:36 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
it is either Angel or Kevin maybe Brian x
When my sister when though it, we all was hoping that it was wrong and the baby will come out sreaming but of couse it did not happen after it all happen my just wonted her family there all the time but she also started to drink. She got a song for him and the words just so right for this kind of thing.
Author's Response: I'm not telling who it is you will just have to wait and see. It has to be awful to be told that your baby has died, I just hope I am capturing the emotion sensitvely enough.
Date: 05/06/09 12:27 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
This was so heartbreaking, brought me to tears. i agree with mary, i'm going to have to be mad at you for awhile. :p I can't believe they lost Molly. I'm really curious about the next couple of chapters and what direction its going to take Nick and Adie. Great work. Can't wait for more! :-)
Author's Response: It is going to take them in many directions, loosing a child has to be one of the worst thing a couple can go through. It is going to be a very challenging time for the pair that is for sure! Thanks for the review hun!
Date: 05/06/09 12:09 am Title: Long Road To Ruin
freakin ah. i think I have to be mad at you for a while. wonder if Nick called Kevin? Cant wait for more! congrats on story of the month!
Author's Response: Thanks for the congrats! It was very exciting! I totally understand that you have to be mad at me for a while, and actually I think it will get worse as the story progresses! LOL!
