Date: 06/08/09 04:26 pm Title: Last Request
Well Well Well ....
I agree with Adie!If Nick didn't care about her anymore at all he wouldn't be in Vegas until that.But I think he's making the same mistake not letting her in again...if they're gonna talk he needs to tell her what is it that he wants to hear from her...she loves him but she doesn't know what else to do because everything she has done seems to be the wrong thing!poor Adie !so he needs to guide her
I hope he notices that!
Great chapter as always!
keep the good work!we love it! =D
Author's Response:
I think you might be the only one who feels sorry for Adie! Yay and Adie fan! LOL! Nick needs to give her one last chance because I think he would regret it for the rest of his life if he didnt. You will find out in the next chapter if he goes with her!
Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/06/09 06:32 am Title: Last Request
Great chapter. And I think he is going, well I hope he does, he should give her and their relationship one last shot. Hope to read the next chapter soon. Take Care!
Author's Response: One last shot indeed. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/03/09 10:08 pm Title: Last Request
It's the funniest thing, on my way home from work I was listening to Unbreakable and Treat Me Right came on and I thought of your story. I think the song suits it well, dontcha think? :)
Author's Response:
Yeah you're probably right. The idea for the title of the story actually came from a song called All Hail The HeartBreaker by a band called the spill canvas. Awesome song and amazing group! Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/03/09 02:45 pm Title: Last Request
Hmm....I believe Nick will agree to go with her, I just hope he doesn't make it so easy on her. She needs to really fight for him by saying the things she should have said months ago. Just hope Nick doesn't get so frustrated that actually jumping out a moving car would be less painful than staying in it with Adie! LMAO
Also loved the brief scene with Aaron. Was straight & to the point, which seems to be the only way Adie listens to anyone. Fluffy words & actions don't seem to work with her. Blunt honesty is the best policy!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Hun!
You are complete right about Aaron, he was straight and to the point and that was definetly what she needed!
She has a lot of explaining to do and nick is going to make it anything but easy! She is really going to have to fight to him an for them!
Thanks for the review hun x
Date: 06/03/09 05:14 am Title: Last Request
AUGG!!!!!! I soo hope that he does go!!!!! more soon!!
Author's Response: You will have to wait and see won't you! Thanks for the review
Date: 06/03/09 03:32 am Title: Last Request
Yes, I think he'll go...this is the last shot...he'll give her a chance. Otherwise, I do believe our next chapter will be an epilouge :o) Wowza, you are on a roll...share the mojo!!!
I liked this chapter, it was one of those necessary, bridge chapters you have to write to set up the others but you did have some meat in here. You showed that even though it has merely been a couple of hours, Nick is kind of standing strong and not running back. But by the same token, he can't just completely let go, he proved that by going downstairs. I think Adie knows that, hopefully she won't use it to her advantage and she will be straight with him, really put herself out there and be transparent. I also really enjoyed the Aaron scene, pretty to the point but necessary! I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!
As for me...I did START today...I would use that term loosely considering not a ton of progress has been made...once I get going its going to roll out, just need time to focus. It is just going to be one really, really long scene...but with a lot important things happening...I am shooting for early next week if not before. I am having oral surgery next Thursday so I definitely want to update before then. Hugs!!!
Author's Response: Maybe it will be the epilougue! LOL! Glad you liked the chapter Hun. You are right in what you say about nick being at the end of his rope, he is completely exhausted but at thecsame time he just can't give up on her, he already told rachel that. He just has no more fight left in him and it is herye to take over. By him going down to see her shows her that, it shows adie that she still has a chance but she will have to be completly open with him and it is going to be very emotional. It will do them both the world of good to get everything out in the open but some of it is going to be really hard to hear. Hope your surgery went okay Hun, will be looking toward to an update soon xxxx
Date: 06/03/09 02:49 am Title: Last Request
Okay this review will be short & sweet. I'm glad to see that Nick didn't stay behind to talk to her. I think if he would have he would've given in right away and they wouldn't be able to work anything out, they would just get back into the rut they were stuck in.
The conversation that Aaron had with Adie for a few brief moments was very simple and straight to the point. I'm glad he said that to her, she needed to hear it. I'm glad she saw that side of Nick, she needed to understand every aspect of why he is hurting and how much he is hurting.
I like how you took a turn in this story by them going on a road trip. Them being alone for 3 days should be interesting, the conversations they are about to have are hopefully going to be eye opening, soul bearing and full of emotion and love. I can't wait. Update soon!
Author's Response: I think nick has finally snapped and it has made adie realize that she can't keep pushing him! She does love him and she does really want to be with him but in order to do that she has to open up to him. It's going to be hard but by putting them in the situation where they just can't walk away is a good idea.
Aaron was complety right, he as blunt and to the point which is what she needed!
Thanks for the review Hun xxx
Date: 06/03/09 02:41 am Title: Last Request
great effort on addies part finally. and so true about the last line. glad she finally sees it. cant wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Glad u liked it Hun and I'm glad u pcked up on the last line
Date: 06/03/09 12:59 am Title: Last Request
Oh he will go. I think just for the simple fact that she said she has lots to talk about. That is what he was looking for. And realizing that she's right...that they are trapped in a car he might finally get the answers he was looking for. This is what they should have done instead of her going to Nepal.
I can't wait till the next chapter to see what he decides and how it turns out! Thanks for the quick update....do it again!! lol
Author's Response: Glad u liked the update Hun. I think your right because this should have happened a long time ago x
Date: 06/03/09 12:35 am Title: Last Request
hmm...do I think Nick will go? Yes. he'd be crazy not too. Things will work out once everything is out in the open. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Are u sure everything is going to work out?! LOL thanks for the review
Author's Response: Are u sure everything is going to work out?! LOL thanks for the review
Date: 06/03/09 12:19 am Title: Last Request
Yay another chapter! I loved how you made Adie fight for the relationship in this chapter. I also loved the roadtrip idea. Can't wait for an update! Oh yeah I loved that you basically mixed Nicks real life girlfriend and Lauren and the cupcake and the picture of her looking at him...Great Job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Hun. I thought mixing is real life with the story makes it more belivavle.
