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Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/09 01:52 am Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

This is your best chapter yet...I love the rawness of the emotion, Nick's breakdown was beautifully written and we are really getting a good look at him.  I don't know how I missed this update (or your next chapter I am about to check out).  I hope all is well with you and that you are settled into your new place!  Hugs!

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review Hun! Glad u liked all the pen up emotion there is lots more to come! That's why it's taking so long to write because I want to get it right!! Flat is great butvthere are still a few boxes hanging around! Thanks for review Hun hugs to u x

Reviewer: Southern_Sweetheart Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/09 02:56 am Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

Okay I'm sorry I've been such a Slacker but I've been crazy busy as well. I am glad I was finally able to sit down and read your update and write you a review!

This was a cute chapter, to finally see Nick freak out was a good thing, I'm really glad she was there to help him through this. It goes to show that he does need her as much as she needs him.

I like how you added in something from his childhood, that is something completely different and its nice to see something like that. Not many people think of adding stuff like that, they just stick the basics and what they think they know from reading articles about him over the years.

They both still need alot of work and they both still need to talk about a bunch of stuff. I hope things work out for them and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon!

Author's Response: Don't worry I've been slacking too! I've just moved so between decorating, unpcking, building flat packs, writing my dissertation, oh and working full time, I haven't been around much! Lol! I guess that's just life and unfourtunetly hobbies get pushed to one side! This is going to be the first "Nick freak outs" of many! He has been so used to repressing his feeli be for do many years that opening up to Adie or even thinkng about them is just too much. He was never taught to deal with his emotions in a constructive way but we will adress that more in the next coming chapters I promise. His childhood plays a major role in that and I'm glad u liked the flashack to his time bfore the boys! As for Adie all I can say is about bloody time! I think she has finally realized that there are two people in the relationship and just because Nick didn't carry Molly like she did doesn't mean he is hurting any less, no matter how much he tries to tell her that he is "over it" Thanks for review!

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/09 09:52 pm Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

Okay so I think I am officially going insane with wanting an update. You and caby are writing my two favorite stories and niether one has updated.....nudge nudge!

Author's Response: I'm a terrible writer! The chapter is done but at the moment the I lyi ternet access I have is through my I phone and so I can't update. I am going to my mums house on Monday tho so you will have an update then!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/09 08:04 am Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

WOW!! This was one intense chapter. I sure hope they fix things, and soon. Loved it. Can't wait to read the next one. Take Care!

Author's Response: I know very intense, next one is going to be even better!

Reviewer: brian_fan_4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 11:09 pm Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

aug!!! more soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: cookies Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/09 02:48 am Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

Nice chapter. At first I thought he was having heart problems..not good! Nice to see Adie coming to Nick's aid for a change. She's stepping up to the plate! Maybe this is the beginning of their long healing process.

Author's Response: Adie hopes that it is! But if it is it is going to be very long! It is LONG over due for her to be therefor him and for Nick it is a strange shift in their relationship, one that he will not be used to because it means focusing the attention on him and his emotions, something we all know he doesn't like! It is going to cause problems that is for sure! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mandalovesnick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/09 12:56 am Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

wow that was very powerful. great job. cant wait for more. :)

Author's Response: Thanks glad u liked it x

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/09 12:43 am Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

that was a beautiful chapter. im so glad she took care of him that way. i know how hard it can be to care for someone through a panic attack and not want to cry yourself. cant wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad u liked it. Panic attacks are scarey, especially when u have to be calmnto help the other person. This is a side of Nick that Adie has never seen and that is going to be a lot more revealed over the next few chapters. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FrickFrackGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/09 10:48 pm Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

This chapter had me in tears!!!! First I wanted to smack Nick then I just started bawling like a baby! Poor guy can't take much more....Hurry with the next chapter!!!!!

Author's Response: Why did u want to smack him? I know he is frustrating because he is holding everything in and trust me that isn't going to stop any time soon! But this mini breakdown will not be his last and although he desperatly wants to hide it he won't be able to forever! Thanksfor the review!

Reviewer: nickgene25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/09 09:42 pm Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

Wow that was such a powerful chapter! Amazingly done. I liked that Adie is letting Nick lean on her for once, I really hope that they make it. Update soon. I know how it is balancing work its crazy lol! If you need anything just ask.

Author's Response: I'm glad u liked it! As for your offer of help u don't want togoto work for me do you? LOL! It's crazy busy for the summer time and we have just had our first confirmed case of swine fly in Picu! Ek scarey then again if I was to get it time off work but I'm pretty sure I would be in no fit state to write! Adis is finally being the strong one and it's going to cntinue into the next chapter but nick is not used to that behaviour he is not used to being the vunetable one and it is going to spark problems! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nickslilmami Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/09 09:38 pm Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

very emotional chapter, but a good one. Nick's finally learning to open up that's a good thing. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: It's definetly a long time coming from him and in the next chapter ( when I finally get roundto finishing it) he is going to try and build up some of the walls that slipped for amonent! It's goi g to be even more emotionally charged then this chapter! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PaulaKTBPA Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/09 08:06 pm Title: All We Can Do Is Keep Breathing

I'm very bad in writing reviews but wow...i enjoyed this update very much! I think they're going to be ok.

Author's Response: Well I am very bad at getting back to u after u leave reviews! But thanks for leaving one! X