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Reviewer: Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 05:50 am Title: Catch Her If You Can: Part 7

Okay, I was doing fine here until you had K doing the song and the *turtle dance*... soda through the nose, THANKS.  Priceless.  And ya know, I can so see Lancy and Kevin doing this ridiculous number, beat-boxing and all.  Jay's girl-on-girl fantasy was hilarious, and when his extended imagination had him pummeling his head, I laughed out loud (literally).  Curious about the rhyming thing... such clever writing! You all are doing an incredible job with this episode, I can tell a lot of work and research went into it. Major thumbs up, and needless to say, I'll be looking forward to each crumb you post. 



Author's Response: LOL Thanks Louise!! We had to include the Carmen Sandiego song in there somewhere, and having Kevin be the one to suddenly bust out in song just seemed hilarious. We had to throw in the turtle dance! The rhyming thing is making fun of the Chief from the Carmen Sandiego TV show; she always spoke that way LOL. Thanks so much!! We put a TON of time into planning and researching for this one, and that's partly why it took SO long to write, so we appreciate you reading and enjoying it!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/11 12:10 am Title: Catch Her If You Can: Part 7

This chapter had me laughing so hard. Leo is egotistical and a douche to be honest. I had to laugh at Carmen sandiego stuff. I actually used to watch the show on TV and I am so amused. I knew the blonde chick was her too. Crazy stuff. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Tracy! I used to love the Carmen Sandiego computer game. It's all starting to come together... just three parts left to post. Thanks for the review!!