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Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/11 05:40 am Title: Wreckage in a Winter Wonderland: Part 1

Ooh... I'm also a HUGE Olympic junkie so I have a feeling I might like this episode too. Lancy is cracking me up with the figure skating and the "What would Brian Boitano too." I'm sure FANS is involved in this, but I wonder why kidnap a figure skater?



Author's Response: Lancy is so much fun LOL. And can you tell we're South Park fans? LMAO. As for who and the why, guess you'll see :)

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/11 05:27 am Title: FANthrax: Part 10

HA LOL! That WAS kind of funny! Well, nice wrap up of this episode. I knew that Dr. Rough was still alive. I think the next episode may have something more to do with the aliens. If my hunch about Donnie is correct there may be more aliens out there to deal with.



Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, there was no way we could kill off Dr. Rough that easily. He's my favorite character; I would miss him too much LOL. The aliens will be back, although not in the next episode yet. But remember your hunch about Donnie if you continue reading after the challenge is over. ;) The next episode is my favorite after the Disney one - hope you enjoy! Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/11 05:12 am Title: FANthrax: Part 9

So glad to hear that Brian is okay and that the antidote worked. It is also nice to see some bonding between Brian and Nick. Perhaps this just might be the turning point of their relationship.



Author's Response: We can't keep those two hating each other forever, as fun as that can be LOL. So we figured after everything, they needed a moment. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/11 05:04 am Title: FANthrax: Part 8

I'm back with the internet so hopefully i can finish reading and reviewing before school really gets under way for me. Something tells me that Nick is right and this is not the last we've seen of Dr. Rough. That is way too anticlimatic for him to go out like that. I was a little confused with the Brian and Opal scene where he lkept referring to her as, "Ashvari." Is that her real name? You girls and your gory violence! You kill me! LOL



Author's Response: Welcome back, Mel, and thanks for the review! Yep, Opal's real name is Ashavari. And I dunno if you were an ER fan, but we had to do a little homage to ER with the helicopter arm choppage there LOL. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 06:27 am Title: Wreckage in a Winter Wonderland: Part 2

The man-purse. Says it all. LOL!!  I just love Lancy and his exhuberance.



Author's Response: LOL Thanks! We love writing Lancy. He's a lot more fun than Veggie Boy! =P

Reviewer: Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/11 06:00 am Title: FANthrax: Part 10

Priceless, absolutely priceless!!  Poor Lancy.  What a great episode, you all rock!!



Author's Response: Thanks, Louise!!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 06:47 pm Title: FANthrax: Part 5

Amazing how they found out so much about her just by going through her CM profile. By the way I LOVED the AC rip off website LOL. I'm a little concerned though about Nick sticking Brian with that pin that came from the concert. I think it may be contaminated. I hope Brian doesn't get sick!



Author's Response: Thanks! We had fun with the AC rip-off LOL. You may be right to be concerned... ;)

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 06:27 pm Title: FANthrax: Part 3

I have to give Red and Brian credit for not like murdering Nick. He was just a tad bit annoying in this chapter. He's beginning to grate on even my nerves lol. This virus sounds REALLY gross. You know how much I love gory descriptions. I think it's pretty obvious that the disease originated from The Moffat's concert. Wonder how long it'll take for them to figure it out.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Mel! LOL I knew exactly what part you had to be on before I went back and looked at it, just from what you said about Nick. I remember us writers having a conversation about how his actions might have been over the top even for this story LOL. Believe it or not, this is the toned down version. I think we just wanted to make sure we had plenty of comic relief to make up for the fact that, if you really think about it, this episode is kind of a downer! We had fun writing the virus, though. =D Thanks again!

Reviewer: steffilu84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 12:37 am Title: Catch Her If You Can: Part 8

Tanja Copenhagen! Still up to her old stealign ways. OMG that cracked me up. I can always count on 00Carter for a good laugh.



Author's Response: LMAO we try to keep y'all laughing. Thanks! Good to know we're not the only ones who think we're funny hehe. :)

Reviewer: Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 09:16 pm Title: Catch Her If You Can: Part 8

Poor Diamond, forced to abandon her treasures! Good thing it wasn't Lancy, he would have died from despair.  :)   Really great chapter, major kudos on the research into the codes.  Nice mix of comedy and light drama (the old HimTak ruins... interesting!), and as always the action was fun. This is really superior writing, and I will be eagerly waiting for more.



Author's Response: I know, if it wasn't for the fate of the world, she might've stayed with her things LOL. Thanks Louise! We did SO much research on this, trying to make sure everything was correct. We always love seeing your fabulous reviews. :)

Reviewer: Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/11 05:50 am Title: Catch Her If You Can: Part 7

Okay, I was doing fine here until you had K doing the song and the *turtle dance*... soda through the nose, THANKS.  Priceless.  And ya know, I can so see Lancy and Kevin doing this ridiculous number, beat-boxing and all.  Jay's girl-on-girl fantasy was hilarious, and when his extended imagination had him pummeling his head, I laughed out loud (literally).  Curious about the rhyming thing... such clever writing! You all are doing an incredible job with this episode, I can tell a lot of work and research went into it. Major thumbs up, and needless to say, I'll be looking forward to each crumb you post. 



Author's Response: LOL Thanks Louise!! We had to include the Carmen Sandiego song in there somewhere, and having Kevin be the one to suddenly bust out in song just seemed hilarious. We had to throw in the turtle dance! The rhyming thing is making fun of the Chief from the Carmen Sandiego TV show; she always spoke that way LOL. Thanks so much!! We put a TON of time into planning and researching for this one, and that's partly why it took SO long to write, so we appreciate you reading and enjoying it!

Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/11 12:10 am Title: Catch Her If You Can: Part 7

This chapter had me laughing so hard. Leo is egotistical and a douche to be honest. I had to laugh at Carmen sandiego stuff. I actually used to watch the show on TV and I am so amused. I knew the blonde chick was her too. Crazy stuff. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Tracy! I used to love the Carmen Sandiego computer game. It's all starting to come together... just three parts left to post. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 11:44 pm Title: Here Ye Be Pirates: Part 6

Now Justin lost his hand? Reminds me kind of Captain Hook. Interesting about the whole back story with AJ and Howie. So being rejected from HimTak sent him off the deep end? Interesting...



Author's Response: Yes, yes he did. Poor Justin... haha, not. We figured losing a hand was appropriate for a pirate episode, a la Captain Hook like you said. Yeah, this was an important episode for working some Dr. Rough back story in. He definitely has some issues with rejection LOL. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/11 06:31 am Title: Here Ye Be Pirates: Part 2

Hmm... I'm wondering who this person is that is infiltrating HimTak. Could it be Leo?

Loved the 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea reference and the AC shout out!



Author's Response: Good question! Thanks, Mel! :)

Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/11 06:22 am Title: Here Ye Be Pirates: Part 1

First off I SERIOUSLY thought that was Johnny Depp in the banner until I looked closer. OMG the resembelance between AJ and Captain John Sparrow is pretty uncanny! I don't know I never realized it before lol.

In the beginning of the chapter I was very curious as to who the brother/sister pair was. At first I thought that it may have been Nick and one of his sisters for some reason, but I figured out pretty quickly that wasn't the case. I guess we'll find out who Aly's brother is soon enough.

I thought the James Bond references were kind of funny and I am loving the rivalry going on between Nick and Leo. Something tells me this could get interesting.



Author's Response: I know, right? AJ would make a great Jack Sparrow! I love that graphic. Aly and her brother are both new characters in this episode, and to be honest, the brother isn't really that important; he was just a catalyst for this mission. Glad you liked the Bond references and the Nick/Leo rivalry. Thanks, Mel!