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Reviewer: fracktrain Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/08 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

I've always wanted to see a choose your own adventure story with backstreet!yaaaaa...thanks for the story

Author's Response: WOO HOO for Backstreet Choose You Own! Oh yeah! lol. thanks for reading and leaving feedback, we appreciate it! -Kris

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/08 04:50 am Title: Chapter 2B - The Right Door

YAY for AJ and Nick fighting! WHOOT! And the Wizard of Oz things were a very nice touch! lol. you guys both did well with your parts! *excited to see Steph's follow up*

Author's Response: Haha, thanks Kris!! When I was chatting with Kelly, I told her that when I read her chapter, I envisioned an "Alice In Wonderland" scene while with my chapter I envisioned "Wizard of Oz" scene, lol. I'm weird like that. But yess, I can't wait for Steph's installment either!! =]

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/08 04:48 am Title: Chapter 2A-The Left Door

okay...'church boy' is now our name for Brian...I used iy, you used it...I'm not sure if Rebby did...but it'll be AJ's nickname for Bri!

YAY for burnt eyebrows! Oh one more thing...BLUE SHAPES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Go blue shapes, and go church boy!!!!  I was so excited to get mine and Reb's chapters out, so yay!

Reviewer: kevmylove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/29/08 03:49 am Title: Chapter 2A-The Left Door

I can see those guys bickering...and once again I was crackin up! Leighanne bots!! hahaha! fuzzy bunnies and its funny that all the things happen to poor HOWIE!! OH and the singed eyebrows...LOL!

Author's Response: You have to make a crack at Kevin's catterpillars, and I couldn't help the rest of it.  I was having too much fun with this.  I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: MonkeyAbu Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 10:59 am Title: Chapter 2B - The Right Door

Dude, this had me laughin' the entire way, but I'm totally shocked that Kevin was the first one to lose a life. AJ & Nick's bickering was perfect and I enjoyed your descriptiveness PR. This is definitely a unique idea and I can only imagine how it is going to turn out. Keep up the great work and update soon! [Ashley]

Author's Response: Haha, thanks Ash!! I'm really glad you like this!! And I wanted to follow Kelly, could you tell?! :P I can't say this enough, but I LOVE when people write Nick and AJ and go on to describe their bickering ways, their trouble making ways, the relationship they possess. *sighs* I love me some Nizzle & Jizzle! Lol. But thanks again for the review hun!! And know that I'll be patiently waiting for a ITNC update!! =]

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 08:51 am Title: Chapter 2B - The Right Door

LMAO!!! Where do I start? That was hilarious Rebby. AJ was hilarious! I love the "fucking floating flower" part. And how Nick says that AJ reminds him of Dorothy...and Howie of Toto. *sigh* I just love AJ and Nick bickering like children.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm really glad you found this concept interesting and funny Selly!! I was thinking of GTA, where everything the main guy collects is floating for some reason, and I could just imagine AJ's reaction to stumbling across a floating object, lmao. I love when people write banter between Alex and Nickolas as well!! Lol. Glad you enjoyed this though Sel, and thanks for reviewing hun!!

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Cool concept. Interesting...=)

Author's Response: YAY...we all hope that you'll keep reading! -Kris

Reviewer: luna610 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/08 08:31 am Title: Chapter 2A-The Left Door

LOL at AJ calling Brian "church boy." And I love him cursing...you write him well...it's hilarious!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I think all of us writers are feeding off of each other and that totally helped me!

Reviewer: biltmore1999@yahoo.com Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/26/08 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am enjoying this story already. Should be interesting to see how they work together in the story.

Author's Response: It'll be fun! thanks for reading, we all hope that you like how it comes along! -Kris

Reviewer: kevmylove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/25/08 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG this had me crackin up!! Love the idea can't wait for more! Update soon!

Author's Response: THANKS! It took us forEVER to get everything talked out for this! I am so glad that you liked it. Hopefully the girls will get thier parts up soon. thanks for the feedback and I hope you'll keep reading. -Kris

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/08 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hurry up with 2A!!!!! I'm ready to go left! Lol.

Roflmao!!!! This is rather humourus!!!!

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: lol. Kel and Rebby are supposed to be working on the choice chapters. we are all so excited and amped up over this, you'll probably see fairly frequent updates...I hope. But YAY for having Lenni as a reader!!! Don't worry, Lenni, you can put the stick away...you won't need it in this story. *grin*

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/25/08 02:06 am Title: Chapter 1

so, this was an interesting start. i wonder why you chose Mare as the evil fan. I'm not sure how you'll pull off the whole choose your own adventure idea, but good luck! also, maybe it's just me, but the beginning sounds fairly similar to Fan Friction's "fan gone crazy" ideas. Anyway, it's an interesting start, and I wish you well in collab-ing as it's fairly difficult to do :)

Author's Response: we decided as a group about Mare for a few different reasons. don't worry, we have everything worked out as to how the 'choose your own path' is going to work and everything. we worked that out BEFORE we decided to start it. and the collabing...I'm not worried about either, because we are all friends and we have already worked out a lot of the details. and I assure you (and everyone) that all our ideas were cooked up between the four of us during a long night on AIM...so any similarity is purely by accident!

I hope you will continue to read the story.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/08 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1

“No,” AJ rolled his eyes, “normally the first level is spent frolicking in a field of daisies, in the sunshine, singing the Sound of Music, with a pink poodle, and collecting little fuzzy bunnies to bring home for your mommy. YES you fucking kill shit in the first damn level! Shit, Howie.”

Okay, I completely LMFAO with this part! I love your quirky, sarcastic lines Kristal!! Lol.



Author's Response: glad you liked it Rebby! I always make AJ a sarcastic dick, lol. I can't wait to see where you and Kel take the next chapter! hope it's up soon. -Kris

Reviewer: felikia2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/08 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

yay for choose your own adventures! i will most definitely be doing every single possibility (always did that with my goosebump cyoa books hehe). n i have a question, will there be 2 choices for every chapter, meaning alot and alot of chapters? hehe. and i loved the mario cart comment, mostly cause thats the kind of game i love lol.

Author's Response: yay! I'm glad you are excited! I can't explain how it'll be done, but we've got it all planned out. I hope you will continue to read and thanks for the review!