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Reviewer: DelphinaCarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/26/09 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lmao funny funny and poor Nicky being threatened by a baby hehe

Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/08 06:15 am Title: Chapter 1

lol very interesting, good job.

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/08 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1

WOW. Is it eerie that I refused to read ANY of the challenges before I complete my own and when I'm finally done, I come to read yours and find that it's quite similar to what I've written?! LMAO. Well... not about Mason and all that jazz, but the story being told in first person, Nick being the narrator, and Nick waking up to find out that he was only dreaming, only to realize that he's still in a dream, lol. Damn, yours was really good!! Now I'm not sure if I want to post mines, lol.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/08 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1

aww lol great job getting all the elements of the challenge in. Loved the talking cigarette. The only thing you got wrong, can you guess? "I mean here I am talking to a friggin no smoking sign, there seriously cannot be that much more of my sanity to loose can there?"

That should be lose. Seems like a lot of people have trouble with that one lol that's why I included it.

Great job with the story and an extra gold star for writing it so quickly after the challenge was posted.


Reviewer: Negris Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/08 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1

that was so crazzzyyyy omg poor nick

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