Date: 03/20/09 10:12 pm Title: All My Bags Are Packed
LOL at AJ. I've never read this one before, I'm not big on romances at all, but you're a good writer and I'm really enjoying this one so far. I think it's because Caity is written as a really cool girl and her and Nick haven't become immediately involved. I have an idea about what the secret reason was for their break-up, but I can't wait to for that chapter. My only criticism was that James suddenly became Jack for a little bit, but you fixed that. lol
Update soon please!