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Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 04:14 am Title: Twenty-Five: Questions

Whoo! I finished! This was cute, I enjoyed it. :) I will fill out my survey sometime tomorrow!

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 03:44 am Title: Eighteen: Never Be The Same Again

Ah the cameo chapter! Lol sorry I haven't been reviewing much I've been too busy reading! :) motoring right along...

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 04:48 pm Title: Six: Keeping it Inside is Killing Me

I kind of saw this coming after the last chapter, poor Brian. What I didn't understand was Dani's motivation to tell him it was all a sham after only a few minutes. How would she be able to keep this up long term when she crumbles under pressure so quickly?

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 03:55 pm Title: Five: Scandalicious

Hmm. I'm now starting to see why you included the conversation between Dani and Brian by the vending machines.

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 03:40 pm Title: Three: Leave It Up To Me

Back to a Nick chapter and again I really enjoyed this one. I think at this point in the story it is clear you are more comfortable using his voice than Dani's. The flow in this chapter is so much quicker than the last. I also like how you make it very clear that you're aware of the cliche that is the best-friend-rom-com. Both in the first chapter and this one I liked that you drew attention to the idea, in principle, being outlandish and weird for two friends.

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 03:30 pm Title: Two: Hatching A Plan

I wasn't as big of a fan of this chapter, to be honest. I felt a bit like the same information was reiterated just from the opposite point of view. There was only a small portion of the chapter (her deciding on the plan) that really moved the plot, I guess I would have preferred she talk more about herself than talk about Nick since he already told us about his ex. :)

Reviewer: Julilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/11 03:08 pm Title: One: 'Till The End

Okay, here I go! I liked this first chapter the narration really felt like it was being told by a teenage boy. Despite being in first person I got a good sense of who Dani is and where she's at in her life. :)

Reviewer: FiliKlepto Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/11 03:36 am Title: Eight: Drawn to the Fire

"Wait, sexy, Nick, what?" Ah ha, that made me laugh ♥



Author's Response: lol thanks :)

Reviewer: FiliKlepto Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 01:34 am Title: One: 'Till The End

I just added this to my Kindle!! The first chapter was really funny... Nick's voice is just perfect here. He definitely sounds like he's 19! Hard to believe that was so long ago... I can't wait to read more :)



Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! I really enjoyed writing Nick's chapters the most with this one. I hope you like it! :)

Reviewer: ResaD Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/10 08:12 am Title: Twenty-Two: Don't Fight, Don't Argue

Ooooohhh! Somehow...i missed the fact that the story was done! How....dont know! But im a reading! And...in shock. Bri...nick...dani...just a whole messed up combo! But I love it and im reading on!

Author's Response: Aw thank you Resa!! I'm glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 03:52 am Title: Twenty-Five: Questions

Congrats...you finished as you had hoped...I bet that is a good feeling!!! And, you did it in a way that leaves things open for future Nick/Dani stuff!

Good job!!! Whooo...onto the next one :o)

Author's Response: Thanks Darby! You are always such a faithful reader and friend to me, I really appreciate it :) I forced myself to finish it today, I just really wanted to get it done, and I had a pretty clear idea of how to bring it to a close... at least for now ;) I am very excited to start fresh!! Muah!

Reviewer: mary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 05:22 am Title: Twenty-Four: Freedom

aw that is super cute! want more!

Author's Response: Thanks mary! I hope to write more soon

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 05:22 am Title: Twenty-Four: Freedom

such a cute chapter cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/10 04:14 am Title: Twenty-Three: Not to Blame

Oh how I have missed your writing...I love the way you write Nick's first person in this story! So nice to see an update of one of my favorites, I haven't seen an update of a story I follow in ages. I hope all is well with you! XOXO!

Author's Response: Darby!! Seeing your comment made my night! Things are certainly good with me! I felt like kind of a jerk for disappearing and not writing anything or posting on the forum for literally months. But I got all excited about the tour, so I figured it was time to get my butt in gear and start writing again. Anyway.. I am glad you like Nick's first person POV, cause I thought I was sorta losing my touch after not writing it for so long. Mucho thanks for you comment hun.. muah! Hope everything is good with you and your fam!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/10 03:56 am Title: Twenty-Three: Not to Blame

awesome job cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks :)