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Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 10:01 am Title: Eight: Drawn to the Fire

ooooooo she so should tell him awsome job cant wait for mroe.

Author's Response: Yeah, she probably should tell him hehe. Thanks!

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 07:02 am Title: Eight: Drawn to the Fire

Great chapter. And let me tell you, she fell for him faster than I thought she would,lol. Now she's in for a ride. Can't wait to read more, Take Care!

Author's Response: Thanks Yara! Yeah, she fell for him pretty quickly, but it's Nick Carter! lol how can you not? :P I'll try to write more soon!

Reviewer: Jamanda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/07/08 12:10 am Title: Eight: Drawn to the Fire

Oh my gosh, please write more like now? I knew that Dani would start to have somewhat real feelings for him. Dear lord, his hair sounds amazing, haha. I'm really excited to see what's going to happen next. And Nick really is oblivious. I wonder if he likes Dani or not. I guess I'll have to wait and see. Please don't make us wait too long, that'd be a total shame. Great job!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah Nick does have nice hair. I'll try to write more as soon as I can, but the school year has started up again and things are a bit crazy at the moment. Nick is pretty oblivious, isn't he? I guess we'll find out next chapter what his feelings about the whole situation are ;) Thanks Jamanda!

Reviewer: DaniGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/08 11:30 pm Title: Seven: On The Rise

Hehe, Nick is blunt isn't he? He just flat out asked if Dani had feelings for him - what if she did? Would she have been honest and told him? I think she's beginning to though, though i don't think she realizes it just yet. That was such a guy thing for him to do though. Way to go Carter - very compassionate.

And Nick didn't really help the matter by going to talk to Brian. It seems as if he just gave Brian more hope that Dani would date him, but it seems kinda clear that she doesn't think of him in that way and wouldn't date him. I thought when he told Dani he'd go talk to Brian, he'd actually tell him that she wasn't interested but I guess that would be a bit harsh and wouldn't fit too well, but either way, this was great. I'm excited for this drama you speak of that's up ahead! I adore this story. You're doing awesome girlie :)

Author's Response: Haha Nick is totally blunt. I think you're right about her beginning to like him, but we'll have to wait and see what happens. Nick was kind of being a little shit disturber by going to talk to Brian. He's kind of giving him some false hope, which isn't going to be the best thing later on. I'm glad you like it so much and I'm going to try my best to get an update out soon! Thanks hun! :o)

Reviewer: DaniGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/08 11:26 pm Title: Six: Keeping it Inside is Killing Me

HAHAHA I knew it! Fuck yes! Man, does this girl let off a phermone or what? I wish I were her. Fake dating Nick Carter and have Brian AND AJ "pining" after her. Btw, it was hilarious that you had Brian say that he was pining for her. It's so cheesy but it's such a Brian-innocent thing to say. I burst into giggles. This scene was awkward. Poor Brian but also poor Dani. How can she not have any feelings for the man!?!? Lord, am I biased or what? I'm glad she told him the truth though. I wonder where this is gonna go?

LOVED THIS! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks Dani! Sorry it took me so long to respond to this, I was typing my replies and then I got distracted :P This whole scene was so fun to write, I love the uber awkwardness, makes for some good drama! You're right though, Brian is totally sweet and if only she would just feel the same way it would make things that much more simple.

Reviewer: DaniGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/08 11:23 pm Title: Five: Scandalicious

Does Brian like Dani? *gasp*

And AJ lmao Good lord, the man is crazy over this girl. I loved that entire scene. I love the line bros before hoes - I can totally see AJ saying that for real. AJ's kinda dense though - it's stupid for him to get mad when it's obvious Danica doesn't like him like that. He's just bent out of shape before his charms didn't work on her.

I'm very intrigued by this Brian thing however :)

I loved this chap! I'm excited for the next one. You're doing a great job with this Steph. And I know I've said this plenty times before, but I love your writing. Everything always flows so well and I breeze through these chapters because of it. *hugs*

Author's Response: Oooh you called it! AJ is pretty crazy over her eh? That part was so fun to write because you can definitely picture AJ and Nick getting so over the top emotional over the whole thing, and not really knowing how to handle it maturely. I thought you would enjoy the Brian aspect :P I'm really glad to hear that you think I'm doing a good job on this so far! Love your comments as always! :o) Oh and I just had to throw in that whole "bros before hoes" line LMAO I cracked up the first time I heard that this summer from my coworker.

Reviewer: DaniGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/08 11:20 pm Title: Four: Girlfriend

Did I tell you how much I love this story? Cause I do. Mucho. I love Dani and Nick's friendship. I think they're hilarious together. You did a good job at getting the awkward factor there - eventhough they're cute, I could still feel how weird it must be for the two of them. I'm interested to see where this will all go! And I freaking love Can't Hardly Wait! LOVE LOVE! Great job Steph!

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much Dani! And you'll be happy to know that I've already got plans for MAJOR sequelage for this. Danica's fun is just beginning, muhahaha! I'm glad you thought the awkwardness came off well, cause well they're such good friends, it's so weird when things are taken to the next level (even if not for real ;) Thanks again hun! *muah*

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/29/08 06:45 am Title: Seven: On The Rise

Nice chapter. I just wished she liked Brian, it would have been soo easy, but as we know not everything is easy, there always has to be some complications, but hey, that's drama and we all love drama, so please update soon; Take Care!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Yara! Of course if things were easy, we'd have no story =P There is definitely a lot of drama to come, so I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 11:34 pm Title: Seven: On The Rise

Of course!  Glad to be of assistance!  You are on a roll!

Author's Response: Thanks! Let's hope it continues!

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 08:18 pm Title: Seven: On The Rise

Awsome job. really well done i cant wait for more. and i think she is starting to like nick hehe...

Author's Response: Thanks hun! She's starting to like Nick eh? Well we'll see ;)

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 02:50 pm Title: Six: Keeping it Inside is Killing Me

Wowza...Dani is a hot commodity.  I can't believe she blew her cover so quickly and easily.  I can smell the drama you so love coming!  Great job, hun...update soon!

Author's Response: Yes she is hehe! I guess her telling Brian right away shows how guilty she feels about actually hurting someone she cares about, but that doesn't mean there won't be drama to the extreme! Thanks Darby! *muah*

Reviewer: cabybakes Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/08 02:47 pm Title: Five: Scandalicious

I'm finally catching up, sorry I have been a bad friend and haven't read your updates!  I love the bros before hoes line...I crack up everytime someone says that!  Great job hun, so funny...onto the next...

Author's Response: Thanks hun! You're not a bad friend at all, everyone has been so busy this summer I totally understand :) I love the bros before hoes too LOL a guy at my work said it, so I just had to use it.

Reviewer: A-Rok Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/17/08 04:32 am Title: Six: Keeping it Inside is Killing Me

That was an awesome twist...can't wait to read more !

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I'll try to have a new chapter up soon :)

Reviewer: Yara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/08 06:51 am Title: Six: Keeping it Inside is Killing Me

wow, I totally didn't see that one coming, not at all,lol. Well, now poor AJ and poor Brian,jeje, atleast she told Brian the truth. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Take Care!

Author's Response: Thanks Yara! Yeah, at least she told Brian what was really happening, let's see what he does with the new found information hehe.

Reviewer: blueleeryan Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/08 10:18 am Title: Six: Keeping it Inside is Killing Me

omg omg so did not see that coming. i cant wait for more awsome job.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm Glad that I was able to surprise you hehe