Date: 07/07/09 06:49 am Title: Eighteen: Never Be The Same Again
Awsome so can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks!! There will be more soon!
Date: 07/07/09 06:22 am Title: Eighteen: Never Be The Same Again
awesome update. she did get a little crazy with him when he was just trying to be sweet. cant wait for another update!
Author's Response: She did get kind of crazy.. but hopefully she realized that he was just being Nickish...whatever that means lol Thanks mary!
Date: 06/26/09 10:05 pm Title: Seventeen: No More Lies
Omg I loved it. Yay an update yay. So can't wait for more hope not such along wait.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to post an update faster this time :)
Date: 06/24/09 11:38 pm Title: Seventeen: No More Lies
still reading..lol. about time nick got his self together but is this just a ploy cause he seen dani with brian i hope not. either way great chapter.
UPDATE!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I guess you'll have to keep reading to find out what Nick's master plan is ;) I'll try to update soon.
Date: 06/24/09 07:26 pm Title: Seventeen: No More Lies
Well hello stranger! Good to have you back! I love your flare for the dramatic and the way you have it come across in Dani. Even Nick, he tries to be so laid back but he is all DRAMA DRAMA too, just how you like it! Great update!!!
Author's Response: Haha it's so true. Nick is definitely a little drama queen as well. Thanks Darby!
Date: 06/24/09 06:44 am Title: Seventeen: No More Lies
ME
Author's Response: Thanks for reading =)
Date: 06/24/09 01:33 am Title: Seventeen: No More Lies
finally nick! lol and finally to you to I suppose! great udpate!
Author's Response: Yeah finally indeed haha. Thank you!
Date: 04/14/09 09:03 pm Title: Sixteen: First Date
this is a good story...update soon plz....
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try my best
Date: 03/21/09 04:25 am Title: Sixteen: First Date
Ugh, I could just sense the awkwardness, and it made me cringe the whole way through! So did she really like it? Or was it really just awkward for her the whole time? Does she like him? Could she like him? I want to know! Brian clearly adores the girl. I can see him getting hurt, of course, but maybe not for awhile. I think it's good that Danica gave him a chance at least. Who knows where it could go.
I know you're busy as hell, but I hope you update soon! I really do. I always enjoy reading your stuff. It makes me smile! Wonderful job love! :)
Author's Response: I was also crining while writing this, you're right, it was just so awkward. It was good of her to give him a chance, but was it for the right reasons? I guess only time will tell ;) I am super busy but I have been REALLY slack on the updates lately. I miss the days when I'd churn out a chapter every day haha this series would be finished already! Thanks so much for sticking with me Dani :) You're awesome!
Date: 03/21/09 04:19 am Title: Fifteen: Raise Your Glass
So Steph, you posted this ages ago and in true Dani fashion, I'm just now reviewing. I'm a douche. 'Nuff said lol.
I love the last line to this chapter cause it's so true! There WILL always be cheesy garlic bread! You can never go wrong with that. I'm all in the mood for it now lol.
Also! I forgot how much I love first person narratives. I think it's awesome getting a first account of what a character is thinking, and the fact that it's Nick, and that it's you that's writing it, makes it all the more awesome. You're friggen GREAT at making his thoughts believable. He's all over the place, and he's worried and nervous, and he's jumbled. It comes across perfectly and it's so fun to read! He's freaking out and it's hilarious lol. I loved this chapter my dear! I'm very interested to see what Brian's up to. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Dani! I'm sorry I took so long to respond to this.. I'm way lame LOL. I'm really glad you liked it, I just had to put the cheesy garlic bread bid in there haha, cause you know Nick would just forget all his problems once he started eating.. But thank you for the major compliment. I'm glad Nick's randomness comes off as believable, cause his thoughts have to be random but still cohesive you know? Err anyway I'm rambling. Thanks for the lovely review my dear!
Date: 02/05/09 03:39 am Title: Sixteen: First Date
Awsome job
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 02/04/09 08:28 pm Title: Sixteen: First Date
Dani cracks me up! She is so skitzy, which I love...poor thing has been riled up for a while now. Hopefully she will get her equilibrium back. I was secretly hoping that Nick caught a glimpse of the kiss and maybe didn't like it so much??? We shall see...can't wait for more, good stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks Darby! Dani is so fun to write, her thoughts are always so jumbled and confusing. I love that you were hoping for Nick to see them kiss. Maybe he did, we'll have to see next chapter! I'm glad you liked it hun! :)
Date: 02/04/09 08:06 pm Title: Sixteen: First Date
i really don't know how to feel about her date and that they even kissed each other at the end. to me it seems like they had a nice time but that dani would not stop wishing to be with someone else instead.
Author's Response: I'm glad that's what you got out of the chatper, angel, because that's what I was trying to get across. We'll have to see how Dani sorts out her feelings on that. Thanks for your review!
Date: 02/04/09 08:06 pm Title: Sixteen: First Date
definitely seems to just be a distraction.. hmm.
Author's Response: Definitely does. Thanks for your comment, mary!
Date: 01/23/09 12:23 am Title: Fifteen: Raise Your Glass
so i was reading the story from the beginning till this chapter. and i really like. i kinda like the idea about the plan everything. though you could see that this plan was not going well. and now it is a difficult situation, special with brian. though i think it is not a good idea, to go out with him. or... maybe it is. maybe nick sees what he could lose haha.
hope to get to read more soon ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! We'll have to see what happens, the next chapter will detail Dani's date with Brian and her whole perspective on the situation. So who knows... maybe she will end up liking him ;) I promise I won't wait too long to update! Thank you for your review, it is very much appreciated :)
