Date: 09/28/08 02:53 am Title: Eight: Drawn to the Fire
“That’s ridiculous, I do not like him for real.” I stated firmly. Me like Nick? Gross! Come on, he smelled… well actually, he smelled pretty good. Kind of like a mixture between old spice and Adidas body wash. Uh… okay not really the point. But still! He wasn’t boyfriend material at all, he was… well, pretty sweet actually. It wasn’t like I found him attractive though… except for that hair. Good God, his hair looked amazing now that it had been cut.
Oh fuck me. I did like him for real.
lmao! Fucking genius! I LOVE this paragraph! Oh Steph, how much I miss thee. I loved this chapter. These two are so cute together! And I'm glad that Dani finally realizes she likes Nick. It's kinda sucky that she keeps playing with him though, saying she loves him, but then just joking about it. Nick's astute isn't he? I wonder how Brian's going to react... hmmmm...
I seriously need to come on here more often, but you know what one good thing is about having barely any free time? When I do come on here, I get a hoard of new chapters! And that makes me very very happy :) Great job girlie!
Author's Response: LOL I'm glad you liked it, because I literally had that paragraph in my head from the day I started writing this story. I think she's joking around with Nick to sort of gauge his reaction to the entire thing... which usually doesn't end up being very good. Somehow I don't think Brian's going to be too happy about this new development, but we'll just have to wait and see. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for your fabulous review hun!
Date: 09/27/08 07:11 am Title: Nine: Totally Oblivious
Well, I'm glad she was honest with him about how she felt. Nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Yara! :)
Date: 09/24/08 05:28 pm Title: Eleven: Back-Up Plan
OK...I noticed something in this chapter, it is like Nick is always reassuring himself by saying things like "Besides, it's not like I wanted her for myself. Nope, not at all." - is he trying to convince himself or remind himself that he doesn't have any feelings for her? HMMMM...
The kiss, now his POV was TOTALLY different that Dani's...and he is a cocky little shit. I am interested to see how far he will go to prove to AJ that he can get her into bed.
Keep up the good work hun...great stuff! Hug!
Author's Response: Thanks Darby! I'm glad you noticed Nick's internal monologue about not wanting Dani for himself. You're right, it does seem like he's trying to convince himself that he doesn't have feelings for her. We'll have to see how it plays out. He is definitely cocky! Trying to prove AJ wrong could potentially lead to a messy situation. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 09/24/08 10:42 am Title: Eleven: Back-Up Plan
hehe I so loved it I can't wait for more. Amazing job keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks hun!
Date: 09/24/08 03:05 am Title: Eleven: Back-Up Plan
hahaha. love it.
Author's Response: Thanks mary!
Date: 09/24/08 12:05 am Title: Eleven: Back-Up Plan
Just caught up on the story. I love it so far, can't wait to see what happens between Dani and Nick. I wonder how Nick is going to react if she agrees to go on a date with Brian
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Hmm interesting point about Nick, I guess we'll have to wait and see!
Date: 09/23/08 11:47 pm Title: Eleven: Back-Up Plan
Aww now I feel bad for Dani cuz she told him she was kinda into him and he's like all Yea.. Brian you can have her. Ugh what are you doing Nickolas?
Author's Response: Yeah, Nick's intentions were totally not what she was thinking. Thanks Mel :)
Date: 09/23/08 03:11 am Title: Ten: Cause and Effect
Boys will be boys...but that little sneak attack on the kiss, how unexpected. Dani is in trouble. Can't wait for more hun!
Author's Response: Thanks hun! Yeah, leave it to Nick to do something completely random like that. Dani is definitely falling fast, I'll try to write more soon :)
Date: 09/22/08 09:21 pm Title: Ten: Cause and Effect
hehe i so loved it awsome job cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks hun!
Date: 09/22/08 08:06 pm Title: Ten: Cause and Effect
aw. yay. a kiss. : )
Author's Response: Yay indeed. Thanks mary :)
Date: 09/22/08 08:03 pm Title: Ten: Cause and Effect
Oh you have GOT to be kidding me?!?!? I hope he did it becasue he really likes her and not just to find out if he did or not. But then again, what about Brian and AJ? Geesh...what I would give to have two BSB fawning over me and another as a best friens that might lead to more! She's damn lucky...the bitch *evily glares* Kidding...well...about her being a bitch, not wanting the men. ROFLMAO! Anyways...update soon. Purdy please?
Author's Response: I guess we'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out why he kissed her ;) LOL yeah Danica is pretty lucky isn't she? Don't worry, there will be plenty more opportunities for you to think she's a bitch, Kristal, lol! Thanks hun!
Date: 09/22/08 02:29 am Title: Nine: Totally Oblivious
I love the back and forth, and Nick's processing of the events...poor, dense boy. You are doing a great job with the first person and I love the alternation between perspectives. Great job hun! Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Darby! I'm glad you like the first person, it's fun to write it this way, even though it can be difficult at times. :)
Date: 09/19/08 12:25 am Title: Nine: Totally Oblivious
Oh my... This is certainly turning into a fine mess! As soon as I heard Brian liked her too, I had to admit that at first i was like Oh no... Don't let Steph go down the "Mary Sue/ Every guy in the story is n love with Dani" route, but for the purposes of the story it definitely works. Can't wait to see whar Dani and Nick do about their new found feelings for each other.
Author's Response: Thanks Mel! I was also kind of worried that it was going to look that way at first, but I'm glad that it's working. I have lots and lots of drama planned for Nick and Dani so there's tons more ahead! :)
Date: 09/18/08 07:53 pm Title: Nine: Totally Oblivious
oooo so good cant wait for more awsome job with the chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to have more soon =)
Date: 09/08/08 11:04 pm Title: Eight: Drawn to the Fire
OOOH...I sense drama! I must say I didn't expect our Dani to start falling so fast...and I love the way it just hit her so suddenly. I can't wait to see what kind of drama comes from the Brian situation, because I know you...and you LURVE the drama!
I don't know how I missed this until now...I was going through recent updates and there it was...I know this story is on my faves (cuz you are one of my faves) and I never got an email...wtf? Can't wait for more!!! Hugs!
Author's Response: Yay drama! I had that whole paragraph of it hitting her randomly written in my head since I started this story hehe. You're right, I do love the drama hahaha and trust me, there will be plenty! I'm glad you found it.. and I never get e-mail updates from the site when my favourites get updated so don't feel bad =P Thanks for all the lovely comments Darby! :o) I'm off to read your update now!
