Date: 07/25/08 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Challenge
This was a really cute story! I loved reading it! I did notice quite a few spelling and grammar errors. It made the story a little confusing to read, but other than that it was great! If you'd like help fixing it , let me know. I'd be more than happy to help! Good job! =)
Date: 07/25/08 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Challenge
I liked this story, well done!
Author's Response: Thank you =)