Date: 10/30/08 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
more more i want more lol
i already love this story so please update soon
Date: 10/29/08 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Are my eyese deceiving me? An update? hehe...I keed. This chapter was so sad. Poor thing, feeling guilty about no being there. I'm assuming the guys are gonna go after him now...Can't wait for another update!
Date: 10/28/08 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Woohoo! I'm so excited that you updated on this, I just can't wait to see Nick on a rampage. I loved this chapter, the way you made him have flashes of what happened and having the feeling that he was there...it was Awesome! Update very soon...
Date: 10/28/08 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh man that was so sad i almost cry i cant imagine that something like this happens to me I would die poor nick i'm so happy you updated so please post more !!!
Date: 10/19/08 11:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh man! Poor Nick, I started reading this a while back. Never noticed that you had added another chapter. So sad...
I hope that you are going to still update on this story. I really like it.
Date: 10/05/08 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
girl update please!!!
i cant wait for more
Date: 08/22/08 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
i love this story already
i know its gonna be a great one
update update!!!!
Date: 08/08/08 07:38 am Title: Chapter 3
Really good chapter, please update when you can thanks!!!!
Date: 08/06/08 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow that was great and so sad chapter
poor Nick.
anyway can't wait for more!
update!
Date: 08/04/08 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG that was so sad...poor Nick having to deal with this at such a young age. Can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: I know. Here I was, talking to you about stories that paint Nick out to be the damsal in distress when here I am putting all this shit on him!! Lol. I'm sucha meanie! But um, I think I have finally figured out how chapter four will go (it may be a little short) so hopefully I'll get that done and posted soon. Thanks for the review Selly!! =]
Date: 08/04/08 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so far!
I just wanted to piont out the small fact that it's actually Bobby Jean Carter.But,a lot of people make that mistake,I did. I love how you switched things up like,BJ being older.Haha, I have the same problem with not being able to finish a project.I have four uncompleted stories on here right now.
Author's Response: Ahh, lol. Why did I always think her name was Billie Jean?! *MJ's song starts to play in my head* Well, another thing I'll go ahead and say I switched was her name... the mobsters already called the father Bobby, so... ;) Thanks for pointing that out for me though, would have never known!! Lol. And ugh... I'm seriously pissing my readers off with not updating or completing their favorite stories, I'm so bad at that, lol. But thanks for reading my story and for the correction and the review hun!! =]
Date: 08/04/08 11:09 am Title: Chapter 3
omg poor nicky
this is so sad chapter
i wonder whats gonna happened next?
updates soon please!!!
Author's Response: Yah, talk about a lot of torment and pain to be placed on a child. =[ I'm thinking about what I want to happen in chapter 4, so hopefully I'll get that out sometime soon. Thanks for the review!! =]
Date: 08/04/08 06:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Mob, hmm decent way to go. Though I'd love to know how he got connected to them. I liked the scene with the kids, it's tragic and also showed the humanity of the mobster who even though he murdered them, didn't want to actually see them die.
I'm very interested in where you'll take this next :)
Author's Response: Haha, damn typical mobs!! Lol. And there's this huge twist I'm gonna throw in there... you're gonna have to bear with me hear, cause the whole connection thing won't be revealed too early... of course I gotta keep building the suspense by showcasing little by little how all the connections go. And thanks for actually noticing the fact that I touched up on the humanity of one of the mobsters. I would like to at least think that some of my made up mobsters dude have a little heart. Now I have to think what I want to happen in chapter four. *le sigh* Thanks for the review Rose!! *muah*
Date: 08/03/08 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
no why did you kill the twins. thank god nick left please update asap
Author's Response: Haha, I know I'm cruel for killing off the whole family. =[ But I'm working on an update. I was aiming to post it a day or two ago, but work got it the way. I'll get an update out soon though. Thanks for your review. =]
Date: 08/01/08 04:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Really good chapter please update when you can!!!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks!! Working on chapter three, will have it up either tonight or tomorrow!! =]
