Date: 08/27/08 08:50 pm Title: Second Chance!
hehe i so loved it awsome job. i cant wait for more. i hope he doesnt screw it up again.
Author's Response: Yay thank you so much, so excited that you like the chapter...I was scared it wouldn't work. More coming very soon...thanks
Date: 08/27/08 05:33 pm Title: Second Chance!
Awww, they're so cute. I hope he doesn't end up hurting her again. I feel he sincerely likes her, he just thinks too much about what other people might say. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Yeah...don't get to comfortable...Ray is in for a ride...!! I think he does like her sincerely but you know guys and showing feelings in front of people sometimes...updating very soon. Thanks
Date: 08/27/08 04:18 pm Title: Second Chance!
yeah!! way to work nick, I love this chapter
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it...thought it might not work. Thanks!!! More soon!
Date: 08/27/08 03:13 pm Title: Second Chance!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
He asked her?!? O my gosh! I wasn't expecting it to happen just yet, but I am thrilled! I was just saying last night that you needed to update and then, here it is and its a good chapter too!
How are Mia and mom going to react? When will Nick's family come into the picture? I hope he doesn't screw this up! Although, I half expect him to. lol. ANYWAYS...I hope for another update soon!
Author's Response: You crack me up Crystal have I told you that before!!! LOL!! Yay glad you liked the chapter I was actually a little leary about it. I love all those questions...no lie they give me more ideas...thanks! Updating very soon...maybe tonight...hehehehe!
Date: 08/27/08 03:04 pm Title: Second Chance!
love it update soon
Author's Response: Woohoo!! Updating very soon...
Date: 08/27/08 01:48 pm Title: Second Chance!
AWWWWWWW!! Thats was so sweet, you know when I was reading that I was listening to 'The answer to our lives'. haha lol. Anyway Exelent update@ cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh good song to listen to during this chapter...must make it feel real. That's how I get inspiration sometimes listening to songs. More very very soon.
Date: 08/26/08 07:11 am Title: Stumbled Upon
let me tell you other thing you're awesome to make us hate the boys, in other story am mad with howie and aj, in this with nick for be so childish and aj in this is a bitch
Date: 08/26/08 07:07 am Title: Double Crosser
OMG those damn pills!!! is gonna be a hell, update soon please.xoxo daddy yanke oopps sorry Oriana
Date: 08/26/08 06:56 am Title: Fat but Fun!
reggaetton rule!!!! =0) is so fun dance that type of music. Another awesome story yayy.
Date: 08/26/08 06:35 am Title: So Dumb
not exciting??? the last part was awesome and the girl get naked for him and he rejected.... awesome too
Date: 08/25/08 07:55 pm Title: Double Crosser
Poor Ray Carter darn fool what were you thinking nah that was the problem you weren't thinking you IDIOT!!'
Great update!
Date: 08/25/08 07:44 pm Title: Fat but Fun!
nice but mia poor thing is not good the way she handle herself...
Date: 08/24/08 11:23 pm Title: Double Crosser
He promises he won't hurt either of them, then he goes and has sex with Mia. Stupid Nick, hehe. Oh my gosh, I hope that Ray is going to be okay. I'm really excited to read more, so please post more ASAP! This was great.
Date: 08/24/08 09:18 am Title: Double Crosser
OMG OMG OMG OMG i so got to know what happens next you cant just leave it like that. and aj and nick are both asses. hehe awsome job.
Date: 08/24/08 07:28 am Title: Double Crosser
Aww men, how could you leave it at tha? It was a great chapter. I can't even imagined how that felt, to catch him doing that with Mia after her told her he liked her, he's an ass. and AJ is a bigger one, I don't like him to much in this story, that's for sure. You have to update soon, pleaseeeee. Hope Ray get's better soon. Take Care!
