Date: 10/30/08 04:49 am Title: Chapter 6
i really like how you wrote that, ash =) You're a really good writer :p
Date: 10/30/08 04:30 am Title: Chapter 2
wow...that was intense. i really liked it though....very good. i like your writing style a lot =)
Date: 10/30/08 04:25 am Title: Prologue
Ohhhh, i like that...all you need is the music dum dum dummmm lol but i really do like it hows it opening =D
Date: 10/27/08 04:42 am Title: Chapter 29
Lmao!!! Crazy kids!!!! Ah, the drama of teenage life!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. A.J. is an asshole for not at least calling her for her special day!!!!!
Date: 10/26/08 02:10 am Title: Chapter 28
That no good sonofabitch!!!!!!!!! I hope Kevin majorly kicks his sorry ass A.S.A.P.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Does he NOT realize just how BADLY he's hurting a thirteen-year-old, by burdening her with his problems & secrets!?!?!?! Selfish jackass!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 10/25/08 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 28
what a jerk grrr when am i coming into his life and changing him ;)
Date: 10/23/08 12:23 am Title: Chapter 27
Psst! Someone chapter 27 is here twice!!!!! Dang! I thought I'd gottten lucky & was getting 2 chapters instead of one!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: haha sorry thanks for the heads up I fixed it...hopefully a new chapter will be up tonight i actually have some time off from school work so im writing as much as I can before it picks up again
Date: 10/23/08 12:21 am Title: Chapter 27
Oye vey in a half shell!!!! Dammit A.J.!!!! Can you NOT see how your choices are affecting everyone around you!?!?! Bastard!
~Lenni~
Date: 10/22/08 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 27
great update aj is grrrrrr
Date: 10/20/08 04:49 am Title: Chapter 26
And watch her get stuck living with a.K. Lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 10/20/08 01:22 am Title: Chapter 26
i love it ash i want morrrrrreeeee!!!!
tina
Date: 10/17/08 03:38 am Title: Chapter 25
Then quit doing the drugs & get hlep you dumbass!!!!! Yeesh!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 10/17/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter 25
OUch! Truth hurts! Great story so far I hope you update soon :-)
Date: 10/15/08 01:27 am Title: Chapter 24
Oye vey. A.J.'s gonna be PISSED that she found his drugs!!!! And did her & Matt even use protection when having sex??? She better watch she don't end up pregnant!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Date: 10/10/08 03:24 am Title: Chapter 23
Oye vey in a half shell!!!!! Aren't they, like, 13 or something here?!?!?!?! Yeesh! They'te MUCH to young for sex either way!!!!!! I'm waiting for the cops to show up & break-up the party - lol.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Have fun in Cali!
Author's Response: yea they're young but its the reality of kids growing up too fast when they don't have guidance. More updates on Monday PROMISE!
