Date: 08/27/10 07:51 am Title: Paranoia
What a thought? To think that a mere story could bring a man to his knees. Make him doubt his own abilites and judgement. By the way, I loved it. And..-looks around-...for being a short story...it was a damn good one.
Author's Response: LOL! Not what you're used to seeing out of me, is it? I'm glad you liked it, though!
Date: 09/27/08 09:31 pm Title: Paranoia
whoa. what's up with you and a suspense thing? that was really good. Seriously. Oh, and to add to Nick's list some of usmade the gay, lol. Good job. =]
Author's Response: You really think it was good? I wasn't too sure about this...I pondered over it for days, wondering if it sounded okay. Oh and DUH...why didn't Nick mention that? He's been made gay in a lot of stories! LMAO. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/27/08 06:30 am Title: Paranoia
Nice and smooth. Very simple flow; I liked that about it. Great job on this Kristal! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Thank you. I spent a fair bit of time on this...so I am very glad that you liked it.
Date: 09/27/08 03:20 am Title: Paranoia
I already told ya, but I think you did amazingly with this. Definitely angsty and suspensful. I like how NIck got pleasure out of Kevin's fears! haha. This definitely had me on the edge of my seat for a bit! :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I am glad you pre-read it, for me, because I was worried that it didn't fit the description. You know I'm not one to write this type of story. It was a nice challange though. Oh and thanks for the review, too!
