Date: 11/05/08 06:42 am Title: Chapter 30
Poor girl, she's going to die if she keeps living like that, and were the heck is AJ at? He never goes to pick him up, or talk at all. Take Care!
Author's Response: Well the story is from her point of view... so when I wrote it didn't want to clutter the story up with both sides... but there is a point when his point of view comes into play... All will play out in the end. Thanks for the feedback! Jeni
Date: 11/04/08 05:34 am Title: Chapter 30
UGGGHHHH!!!!! So she didn't go to the doctor? I hope she doesn't end up passing out or really hurting herself. If her blood count is low, she could be crossing into dangerous territory! I really love your story, but I must admit....I HATE how short your chapters are. As soon as I get into it....it ends!
Great Job though!
Author's Response: Sorry I was worried about them being too long so I shortened the chapters...
