Date: 10/24/08 01:39 am Title: Chapter 4
great story!! cant wait to see what happens!! update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for checking it out! I already have the entire story wrote, but I did it in 10th grade, back in 1999, by hand, as in pen and paper! I kept it all these years and recently found it in the bottom of a box of old high school stuff. SO I decided to bring back a little nastalgia and post it on here. It was my first attempt at a fan fic and it is very Mary Sue, but hey I love Mary Sue stories! Thanks again for the review!
Date: 10/24/08 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1
great start lookin forward to readin more :D
Date: 10/23/08 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is great soo far :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I hope you conitue to read it!
Date: 10/13/08 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aww... Brandy Lol Fics like this do bring back memories because I think we've all written something like this at one point or anpther in our writing careers. I think its cool that you are posting it to show your readers how far you've come. That's a great idea!
Author's Response: ****blushes****
I really love this story, but it is so cheesy! I read through the entire thing the other night and found myself laughing out loud at it. Like I said I am doing a few minor changes to it, but nothing major. I am having to type the entire thing because I wrote it by hand in high school. I can't believe I still have it! Thanks for the review Mel..... Now get to work!
Date: 10/12/08 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very good start.
I love this type of fanfiction.
Please update soon...
Author's Response: thanks! Like I said the entire thing is already written, but is all done with Pen and Paper and it was written 10 years ago, so I am having to go back through and tear it apart....Plus actually type it all out! I am glad you are enjoying the beginning!
