Date: 10/07/11 05:57 am Title: Chapter Six: So Innocent
this needs updated
Date: 01/31/11 04:55 am Title: Chapter Six: So Innocent
I think if you drew out the details and made the chapters longer this would he epic! The story line is great tho! I'd help ya with this if you wanted tO help me with mine... The one called: unexpected gift. You have my email!
Date: 12/08/08 12:15 am Title: Prolauge: Preparing
I really like this story, but it'd be better if you made the chapters a bit longer. Update soon.
Date: 11/04/08 06:33 pm Title: Chapter Five: Answers
Wow... There's a LOT going on here. I love the storyline so far, but I think that the chapters are much too short to give it justice. I would llike to see longer chapters with a lot more detail. I feel like we're only just getting the surface of things.
Date: 10/30/08 12:01 pm Title: Chapter Four: Scared
oh dear god! update please! This story is awesome! xoxo
Date: 10/30/08 06:36 am Title: Chapter One: Popstar At The Door
wow intense.....makes me want to read more =D
Date: 10/25/08 12:26 pm Title: Chapter Three: Beach Run
omg, nice update! Hope arron is ok!
Date: 10/25/08 05:16 am Title: Chapter Three: Beach Run
its a good start but some of the chapters are just too short for me to really get a grasp of things but it is good so far :)
Date: 10/21/08 02:06 am Title: Chapter Two: Weighing In
love it! but write more! hahaha
Date: 10/20/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Two: Weighing In
Oh dear god, I hope Nick finds out why he's acting like this! Update soon!
Date: 10/17/08 01:10 am Title: Chapter One: Popstar At The Door
Omg, poor aaron! poor nick! This is very interesting, this is going in the favorites! Love it, update soon!
Author's Response: Poor Carter boys.. =[
Your favorites? Really?? Woo! *Happy dance!*
Thanks for the review!
Peace,Love&Music.
-Ryann.
Date: 10/17/08 01:09 am Title: Prolauge: Preparing
Sorry I couldnt review earlier hun! Classes, yeesh! lol, but great start! Very welcoming!
Date: 10/16/08 07:10 pm Title: Chapter One: Popstar At The Door
omg poor aaron!! who did this to him???
please update!!!!
Author's Response: Well, I can't tell you that, it'll ruin the whole story.. Just keep reading. Thanks for the review! Peace,Love&Music. -Ryann.
Date: 10/15/08 02:37 pm Title: Prolauge: Preparing
hey i cant wait
this story sounds great
please update soon!!!!
