Date: 01/31/11 03:55 am Title: Chapter Six: So Innocent
I think if you drew out the details and made the chapters longer this would he epic! The story line is great tho! I'd help ya with this if you wanted tO help me with mine... The one called: unexpected gift. You have my email!
Date: 11/04/08 05:33 pm Title: Chapter Five: Answers
Wow... There's a LOT going on here. I love the storyline so far, but I think that the chapters are much too short to give it justice. I would llike to see longer chapters with a lot more detail. I feel like we're only just getting the surface of things.
Date: 10/17/08 12:10 am Title: Chapter One: Popstar At The Door
Omg, poor aaron! poor nick! This is very interesting, this is going in the favorites! Love it, update soon!
Author's Response: Poor Carter boys.. =[ Your favorites? Really?? Woo! *Happy dance!* Thanks for the review! Peace,Love&Music. -Ryann.
Date: 10/16/08 06:10 pm Title: Chapter One: Popstar At The Door
omg poor aaron!! who did this to him???
Author's Response: Well, I can't tell you that, it'll ruin the whole story.. Just keep reading. Thanks for the review! Peace,Love&Music. -Ryann.