Date: 10/19/08 01:17 am Title: Chapter 8
That was GREAT! Especially the part when the lord enter howard and together destroy the entity...question though...what hapen to ALex???I thought Alex was there too...anywho it was excellent. Good over evil, truimphly winnig over helping man kind out off his bent ways.....:)
Author's Response: He heh...I forgot to add his name in the epilogue, but he is implied. :)
Date: 10/19/08 01:09 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh crap noooooo, don't give up...great update!
Date: 10/19/08 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh why thank you, you are so kind:p
Date: 10/18/08 12:08 am Title: Chapter 6
I hope Howie arrive in time caused those two are no god at all...so exciting...I cannot wait for more...
Author's Response: Well, you don't have to wait long. The rest of the story is up, and it's there for your enjoyment!
Date: 10/18/08 12:03 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Howie he got a sack full of slaps and screams...darn kevin...
Date: 10/17/08 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
hey the damned don't walk into churches but then again his heart still somewhat pure...and the bastard turn on him atleast he didn't turn on them he was not agreeing on what they were doing...great it have me on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response: Technically, he's not damned. His actions may be vile, destructive and unholy, but remember that he still has his Catholic faith. He's seen the error of his ways, and he wants to change, not just for himself, but to please God, and have Him forgive his actions.
And also, thanks for the reviews! More will be posted tonight! :D
Date: 10/17/08 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh crap they found him I really hate kevin here lol!
Date: 10/17/08 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Will he go thru with it I hope not because I believe she is his ticket to get out or at least for a better life...
Date: 10/17/08 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
BlackWing you got what you wanted and now you want to get out I don't think is going to be eassy but I have a feeling that a bond bigger than blood is going to rescue you and that is......love I cannot wait for more...
Date: 10/16/08 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story so far, but it confuses me a little with all the dialogue bunched up in one paragraph. If you space out between each person speaking it would be easier to get into...but I really like it so far. I don't mean to offend you, but I used to write in big paragraphs and the ladies here taught me with their reviews about the dialogue.
Author's Response: First of all, thank you so much for the review. Second, it shouldn't even be a problem if the story's format is like that. No, you didn't offend me, but there shouldn't even be any trouble to reada longer paragraph. Plus, it's not a big deal.
Once again, thanks for reviewing my story.
