Date: 10/19/08 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh why thank you, you are so kind:p
Date: 10/17/08 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
BlackWing you got what you wanted and now you want to get out I don't think is going to be eassy but I have a feeling that a bond bigger than blood is going to rescue you and that is......love I cannot wait for more...
Date: 10/16/08 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story so far, but it confuses me a little with all the dialogue bunched up in one paragraph. If you space out between each person speaking it would be easier to get into...but I really like it so far. I don't mean to offend you, but I used to write in big paragraphs and the ladies here taught me with their reviews about the dialogue.
Author's Response: First of all, thank you so much for the review. Second, it shouldn't even be a problem if the story's format is like that. No, you didn't offend me, but there shouldn't even be any trouble to reada longer paragraph. Plus, it's not a big deal.
Once again, thanks for reviewing my story.