Date: 08/17/10 08:29 am Title: Zero to Sixty
hot chapter. cant wait for more, love this story. u need to update hehe.
Date: 06/16/10 07:14 pm Title: Zero to Sixty
i really like your story!!!
peyton is such an sweet and funny girl and the way she behaves around nick is so cute!!!! itīs so nice to read, how they get together...slowly... but they canīt deny, they belong together...
and alex and arissa.... she is so cool, and they fit so perfect together... your last chapter was really HOT....
please update soon!!!! i really crave to read more!!!!! greetings from austria! ;o)
Author's Response: Aw thanks, I'm glad you like it:) Yeah, Payton's a slowpoke...I think she'll come around eventually though ;) hehe.
And yep, Arissa is quite the character...she's the one that says what everyone else is THINKING, but she's the only one who's got the balls to say it out loud:) haha. Thanks, I'm thinking the temperature will continue to rise as time goes on... ;) lol.
Thank you so much for reading all the way over there in Austria!! <3
Date: 06/16/10 07:39 am Title: Zero to Sixty
wow.... love your story... and aj and arissa... very hot ^^
nick and payton are sooo cute together!!!
can`t wait to read more...
MEL=)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! I'm glad you're enjoying it!! There's more to come, so keep your eye out ;)
Yep, AJ and Arissa are definitely the hornballs of the crew...haha. Who knows, maybe Payton will find her inner Sex Kitten eventually too! lol.
Date: 02/28/09 04:55 am Title: R&R
i love this story, haha the girls just crack me up. Gotta love Michigan girls, lol.
Author's Response: LOL, thanks! Yeah, I agree, us Michigan girls are pretty freakin hilarious:) haha. Thanks for reading!
Date: 02/27/09 07:25 am Title: R&R
yes! Finally! Ive been waiting for an update. This was a good chapter. just waiting for aj and arissa to GET BUSY! lol
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I'm definitely going to try and update more often than I have been...school's kicking my butt..lol. Oh, and you won't have to wait too much longer for AJ and Arissa;) hehe...
Thanks for keeping up with the story!
Date: 11/08/08 04:40 am Title: Good Morning
wow amazing so cute. I can't wait for more. Loved it.
Date: 10/18/08 10:13 am Title: Shananigans
amazing. Really well writen. So can't wait for more. Loved it.
Date: 10/18/08 08:26 am Title: Shananigans
i'm loving this story! Cant wait to see what happens next.
Date: 10/18/08 07:00 am Title: So Outta Here
I think you've got a pretty cute start here! I like the chemistry between the girls they seem to be really close which is a good thing for illustrating friendship! Only thing that kinda threw me off was just the spacing being so close, but other than that it's a really good start! First chapters are always the hardest to write I think. Sounds like a creative idea I'm definitely looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! And as for spacing, if you're referring to sentences seeming like they're running together, I'm working on that. lol. I don't quite get the spacing on this site yet! For someone who's only 23, I'm pretty computer illiterate. lol. Oh yeah, and I totally agree about first chapters. They are pretty hard sometimes, cause it's so new and you're still trying to find out how you want things to progress. This story is totally experimental for me, since it's my first fic in like 3 or 4 years...haha. I'm definitely hoping to take it further than I've ever taken any of my other fics. I've only actually completed ONE in all the ones I've ever written! I'm hoping it progresses well, I've got lots of ideas spinning around in my head right now! LOL. Any advice or feedback you have is much appreciated:)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/17/08 07:50 am Title: Shananigans
so far your story is really cute....i look forward to reading more of it!
Date: 10/17/08 03:15 am Title: Shananigans
I love it, payton needs to tell nick how she feels. hope to read more soon. update really soon.
