Reviews For The Prediction
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Reviewer: BSBfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

kind of creepy.



Author's Response: Kind of what I was going for. Lol.

Reviewer: Nijntje Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/08 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Not funny!! Okay, no killing Kevin in this one, but still.. not funny! Good, but not funny! ;D

Author's Response: then why am I laughing my ass off right now? lol. I love you Nijntje! Like I told Mare... was anyone hurt in this story? Did I ever say anyone was hurt? LOL Ok, the next one will be better, I promise. I'll come up with something uber fluffy and cute for ya!

Reviewer: LenniluvsBrian Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oye vey in a half shell!!!!!!!!! As IF you left off there!!!!!!!!!!!!! Though, I think we ALL know Kristin & Mason were most likely involved in the accident up ahead!

Hah. You couldn't kill Kevin off, so you killed off his wife & son??? Tsk, tsk-lol.

I knew what his fear was before the other guys did!!!!! Kevin is so predictable at times, I swear!

~Lenni~ 



Author's Response: What? Moi? Killed who? Did you see someone die? I think not. And lol that was sort of the point of the challenge, to leave it in a cliffy. Guess it worked.

Reviewer: Mare Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww yup, that qualifies as a suspense. Well done. I should have said you can't harm anyone related to Kevin at all. LOL but I guess babysteps for you. lol

Here's a random fact you might not know. Brian and AJ did an episode of Crossing over with John Edward. lol It was odd to see Brian of all people there but I think it was Leighanne who coaxed him into it. You might have known that but judging from the opening of your story, perhaps you did not.

I would love to see what your other idea was as well. Loved the open ending. Great job! *sticks giraffe sticker in your updated sticker book!



Author's Response: Lol Mare, who says I harmed anyone related to Kevin? Did I say that? No... But yes, baby steps are always good. And actually, I had no idea that they were on Crossing Over, God! I can't even picture it. THat is weird. Well I'm glad it was suspense, so I won't stress about the second story, but I'll still give it a shot and if I get it done, hey more power to me. It's a Supernatural (as in fandom, and not just genre) idea, my trick has been still involving Kevin and of course a WTF ending... I'll keep working on it. Loved the SN article, btw. And YAY for another sticker!

Reviewer: rebellious_one Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/08 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Holy shit Kelly!! That was funny and heart wrenching all at the same time. I'm not sure if this was your challenge response, I couldn't see it cause I'm on my phone internet right now, but damn... reading this left me laughing out loud at work and my mouth totally agape. I absolutely loved the way you ended it, my heart literally dropped. This was absolutely amazing Kelly, I loved it!!

Author's Response: aww, thanks Reb! I'm glad you liked. Yeah, It was my challenge response. I guess I forgot to mention that in the summary. I am still trying to figure out if it classifies as a suspense or not. What do you think? I did break the word limit, but at least I didn't Kill Kevin, right?

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