Date: 05/17/09 03:20 am Title: Prologue
please update i love this story
Author's Response: thanks for the review haven't been on in ages and I will try to update soon but Im working on a hard story right now
Date: 11/29/08 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
Post More Please
Author's Response: gonna try to have the next chapter up soon
Date: 11/24/08 04:13 am Title: Chapter 5
I am generally pro-life, but I understand that there are exceptions. I think that at such an early stage in her pregnancy and she is already having such horrible problems, with the rape on top of it....I think that an abortion is probably the best thing.
Author's Response: thanks. I myself don't usually support abbortion but there are such cases in that I do and like the story this had to be done for the character to survive
Date: 11/24/08 03:56 am Title: Chapter 2
awww....Edward.....I love Edward. The Twilight series is my favorite! I just watched the movie, it was good, not nearly as good as the book, but I still loved it.
Author's Response: my edward (pouts) i loved the movie. not as great as the book but good!
Date: 11/17/08 12:31 am Title: Chapter 5
ooh this is a really great story. she did try really hard to save the baby but it just wasnt meant to be and there was no other way. i love the story. cant wait for more. poor nick. hmm.
Author's Response: hi mary thank you for the review. I hope you continue to read and review the story.
Date: 11/16/08 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Poor thng. But if she didn't so it it she or the baby or both could have died. It's nice how Nick is being a friend.
Author's Response: thank you so much for the review it means a lot to me.
Date: 11/16/08 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
I feel horrible for Lila & the baby, though they were going to die anyway. I mean, the baby....as horrible as that sounds. I mean, she did all she could - there was just no saving her, unless there was suddenly some HUGE miracle on their behalf.
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing yet again lenni you rock!
Date: 11/16/08 05:19 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow! And careful Carter! You just ran out while on duty, dumbass!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. C'mon! They need a miracle!
Author's Response: lol yeah he did run on out duty and yes he is a dumbass! But hes a dumbass with a heart!
Date: 11/15/08 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
No she can't die!! But she has to get better... updat esoon! :)
Author's Response: thank you for the review. working hard on the up coming chapters.
Date: 11/13/08 07:12 am Title: Chapter 3
Oye vey in a half shell!!!! That royally sucks she can't stop puking.
And roflmao @ Nick playing the evil step-mother!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lenni~
P.S. Heeeeeeey! Lol.
Author's Response: Well nick is the wicked step mother type lol. thanks for the review working on the next chapter
Date: 11/12/08 01:43 pm Title: Prologue
more!
Author's Response: i am trying to get more out soon
Date: 11/12/08 06:15 am Title: Chapter 3
more
Author's Response: lol i'm trying
Date: 11/11/08 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hey Anita! It's nice to see you writing a new story! I like it so far! It has kind of an old-school fanfic vibe; it reminds me of the stories I used to read in the goold old days. And oh, to imagine Twilight being read aloud by Nick... LOL Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reviewing Julie, one of the goddesses of fan fic! I wanted to go back to the old-schoolish type so I am glad you like it. AND NICK CAN READ I MADE HIM SMART! ok kinda lol sorry anyway once again thank you for the review.
Date: 11/11/08 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aw that was so clever and sweet of Nick to appoach her with a book and then volunteer to read it to her. I'm thinking he's not going to tell her that he knows about her rape until later. (I'm guessing your a twilight fan?) good chapter girl!
Author's Response: yes i love twilight my newest obsession lol i had to include it! Thank you for the review!
Date: 11/11/08 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Interesting.. wonder where this will go.
Author's Response: thank you for the review keep checking back!
