Date: 02/01/09 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh, no!! I hope nothing terrible happens to Michelle!
Date: 02/01/09 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 15
Unsuspecting Sunday Afternoon is a fantastic song! I wonder what their writing process for it was like? lol
Author's Response: Me, too! That was my question for SCs this tour, if I'd ever gotten picked. Not a song in particular, but I wanted to know what their process is when they write as a group. I would love to hear about it!
Date: 02/01/09 11:59 am Title: Chapter 14
" I’d become a pro, trying to explain the marks and bruises." oooohhh
Date: 02/01/09 11:50 am Title: Chapter 13
First Kiss!!! eeeeeek :D
But, woah! The end is scary!!
Date: 02/01/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 12
ooooh, I can't wait to read the date in the next chapter! Ooh and btw, I cant totally see AJ leaning against the side of a building being all slick and scaring the wits out of a girl! lol
Date: 02/01/09 11:25 am Title: Chapter 11
Girls night in!! Fun! Nice job on the chapter
Date: 02/01/09 11:17 am Title: Chapter 10
hahaha, Michelle language! And Nickole, Bianna and Alexandra- such teeny names for the girls of the boys! LOL Nice job.
Date: 02/01/09 11:07 am Title: Chapter 9
I loved this chapter!! Your writing style is great, too. The way you write is fun, interesting and witty. Keep it up!
Date: 02/01/09 11:00 am Title: Chapter 8
awww, poor Kevin! LOL. I still miss him.
Date: 02/01/09 10:50 am Title: Chapter 7
This was a cute scene. :)
Date: 02/01/09 10:45 am Title: Chapter 6
You portray AJ well in the story. Even in the story he's charming in his own AJ way!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 02/01/09 10:26 am Title: Chapter 5
great chapter! In the words of Aj, douche bag!"-the Jack guy.
Author's Response: Haha! I was thinking about that video where he was saying it, and then Brian was making fun of him, singing "douche bag of heart."
Date: 02/01/09 10:16 am Title: Chapter 4
" You know, it’s a nice change to be on this end of it." --LOL
I liked this chapter :)
Date: 02/01/09 10:08 am Title: Chapter 3
I hope she gets the job! Lol
Date: 02/01/09 10:00 am Title: Chapter 2
I love the Livedaily mention and I like the way you kind of described the boys' different views on Kevin leavin. Howie, sweet and understanding, of course. Nick, most likely pretty pissed off but in time would come to accept it and appreciate Kevin. Brian, just kind of... blank, LOl. Then AJ, who I think was most sad (still) that Kevin left.
