Date: 02/01/09 09:51 am Title: Chapter 1
This story got my attention from the start! It's really interesting. I can't wait to read more.
But first I want to show you some lines that had me cracking up ;)
"There were too many witnesses to kill him now"
& 'What kind of name was Mindy? Sounded like a poodle.
-that one seriously had me cracking up!!
& 'He took a sip, dramatically smacking his lips together afterwards.' - that one basically cracked me up because I could really imagine Brian and AJ doing that.
Author's Response: Hahaha! Glad you thought the chapter was funny! :)
Date: 01/30/09 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 31
awww... they are so sweet together...
Author's Response: LoL! Thanks so much!!! :)
Date: 01/30/09 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 31
Ok my second attempt on writing a review! Anyways....yay! I am happy AJ will be all right! I don't usually read AJ fics....but this story was AWESOME! I love how the lyrics intertwined with it and Michelle and AJ make a cute couple. SEQUAL! I DEMAND MORE LOL!!! and Nicky was adorable in this chapter! yay!
Author's Response: Haha- thats kind of ironic, because I don't usually write AJ fan fics. All of mine prior to this story have been centered on Brian. But AJ was really fun to write for. Anyways, thank you so much for your feedback! I'm glad you liked the story. And, like I said, I've been thinking about a possible sequel, which would feature Nick more. I'll probably take a break from this storyline first though, so that I can figure out more of the details. Oh, and glad you got a little of Nick in this chapter. :)
Date: 01/30/09 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 31
great ending. loved the whole story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for you feedback all the way through it. You were my first reviewer on this story, so my first reviewer on AC in general. :)
Date: 01/30/09 08:55 am Title: Chapter 31
ahhhhhh! that was soo cute. loved loved loved it. a sequel maybe? hmm great job!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wrote this story with a possible sequel in mind- it would focus a little more on Nick, as well as continue the other storylines. So if I work out those details more, it'll be posted later this year. :)
Date: 01/30/09 08:51 am Title: Chapter 30
ahhh that was too cute. i love their banter! i hope she gets to see him sing the song. lets see!
Date: 01/30/09 06:17 am Title: Chapter 31
Oh, and I forgot to mention that I'll always think of this story when I listen to the song OIAM. :)
Author's Response: Aww thats quite a compliment! :)
Date: 01/30/09 06:15 am Title: Chapter 31
Aww, I loved this story SO much! I'm sad that it's over. The last chapter was amazing! AJ was so sweet getting her the job at the studio. When he let her drive the porsche...yea, totally didn't see that coming! haha I thought he was gonna prove his love in another way, like propose or something. Anyways, great story and I can't wait to read another one from you! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your reviews!!! I appreciated them, and I'm glad you liked the story! :)
Date: 01/30/09 05:59 am Title: Chapter 30
YAY!!! AJ woke up!! The part where Michelle was talking about painting his nails pink REALLY cracked me up!!! haha
Author's Response: Haha me, too. Can't you just picture it? ;)
Date: 01/30/09 04:37 am Title: Chapter 31
Adorable and I can't wait for more from you! Hopefully a sequel!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your feedback for this story!!! And there's a sequel (of sorts) in the works. I've got a storyline I've been thinking about that I'll probably start writing later this year, after I work on a different story. Thanks again! :)
Date: 01/30/09 02:32 am Title: Chapter 30
awwww... aj is FINALLY okay, but please promise me that you wont make him die anymore....
Author's Response: Haha! Your reviews always make me laugh. :) I promise!!!
Date: 01/29/09 06:04 am Title: Chapter 29
You scared me with that beginning of the chapter! I'm glad AJ is in stable condition. I hope he continues to improve. I'm really happy that August is still pregnant, too! YAY!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
Author's Response: Yay- cuz that's what I was aiming for. :) The story's almost finished... ! Thanks for reading! You're the best Chels!
Date: 01/28/09 06:32 am Title: Chapter 29
i love the way this story works with the lyrics so well. ahh im so glad they are still pregnant and happy with each other. cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! I love lyrics... in case you can't tell. :) And yeah, didn't want to leave August and Brian unhappy!
Date: 01/28/09 04:41 am Title: Chapter 29
awwww... aj please be okay...
Author's Response: Next chapter will be more- I promise! :)
Date: 01/26/09 08:22 am Title: Chapter 28
NO!!! Please don't kill AJ!!! Put the next chapter up by Monday night! PLEASE?!
Author's Response: I was trying to get it posted tonight... but I only got half a chapter written. Sorry :(
