Reviewer: Mellz Bellz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/08 03:00 am Title: Chapter 4

I'd be really pissed at Nat for giving some guy keys to my house even if it was AJ lol She's definitely crossing the line here. So far, it is a nice story, but there are quite a few grammatical errors you may want to look at.

Author's Response: Hey! thanks for the review! I m so glad that some people actually read my story .Lol. The thimg is ,English isn't my mother tongue and as far as i moved here (us) to study english literature , thats a good opportunity for me to improve my skills at writing so anyways thanx for the review again! I will be checking my mistakes hope to hear from you again. Ciao

Reviewer: backstreet_lady Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/08 04:47 am Title: PROLOGUE

love the story! cant wait to see what happens next.... update soon