Date: 05/22/10 03:08 am Title: Chapter 7
ooohh yay!! you have update it...waiting for more =) the next chapter looks great
Author's Response:
Well, thank you for the review...and I'm static that you have stuck around with this great story. Now, you got to wait for an update; because, even though I finish writing the story is not type... so I have to see when I can have a little break to do so; as, for right now I'm in the middle of a move and its really stressing moment for me and leave me very little time to play. However if you are really patient you'll get a great chapter in my opinion;)
Also I would love to mention I have other stories in my repetuar to hold you until I can do another update for this story. Like:
- Misterious ways
- Bye, Bye
- The perfect prank
- Chamuel-Beloved One Candy Shop
- Dark World
- The Math Teacher
- Another Late Night
- Neon Blue
- Rage
- Stuck
And my latest short story,
- Love Me Carefully
Along with many others and the most popular One Weird Chat; so, take a chance a read on please leave feedback if you can and tell me what you think of the stories and their individual chapters if you can. I hope I haven't lost you with all this titles lol!
Date: 02/01/10 05:31 am Title: Chapter 6
i love this chapter is very adorable!! I hope that whem howie found out that she is a dancer wouldnt be such big drama and he can see the real women update soon please!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I tought I had lost you; but ,I'm glad that i was so wrong! Yeah there will be a slight drama but not too much...just stick around to find out. Yeah, me too because Yari is a wonderful women; just not given the oportunity in life that she needed at the time but her luck will change I can fee it lol!
Date: 12/04/09 02:43 am Title: Chapter 1
maybe a lil bit but is your creation I just wanna get to the end of the story =)
Author's Response:
What do you mean by " maybe a little bit..."?
Happy New years !!!
Date: 11/25/09 12:08 am Title: Chapter 5
nad please don't loose the passion for this story
Author's Response: Thank you, I have more coming but I think this story needs a makeover what you think?
Date: 11/25/09 12:06 am Title: Chapter 5
that was kindof nice!! exept the all bitchy girls
Author's Response: I thought I lost you a long time ago, I'm so glad that I didn't:)) lol! Yea, but what can I say Yary is an ambient that jelousy is a way of living...thanks for the review:)
Date: 12/21/08 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice chapter. Seems like it could be a nice story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review I was a bit worry cause this is first time I write a story like this so I hope I do it justice in the coming chapters...