Date: 08/12/09 07:34 am Title: Chapter 1
It stands out with a troubled scene that instantly catches the eyes, and hard to pull away. Something that I can relate to in a way. Exceptional! Captures the attention of the average troubled adolescent or young adult with an emotional touch. Brilliantly Written!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this awesome review. The character Rachel is modeled after me. Much of what she goes through is based on my own life. She's a sweet soul, but very troubled with her past. You're going to see her character blossom into a strong young woman as the series goes on.
Date: 08/12/09 04:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I am deeply touched by this moving story. It is brilliantly written. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! =)
Date: 05/05/09 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this rewrite, I remember the old one, like you said it's less teeny bopper. Keep it up, I'm off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, girl! I'm hoping that the rest of this will become one of the best pieces of my writing. =)
Date: 02/22/09 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1
great first chapter! cant wait for the next chapter. I've read a lot of your stories and love them. there is 1 in particular that i would love if you updated, it is In Delusion. hint hint.... Lol!
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, I will be working on In Delusions as well as this one! =)
Date: 02/22/09 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, i really loved that chapter...very intense. Ususally chapter 1 is boring, but not yours ;) Can't wait for more :-p
Author's Response: LOL! Awww! Thank you! Be sure to look for more chapters! =)
Date: 02/22/09 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent rewrite Rachel!!! Looking forward to reading more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Expect more chapters tonight!
Date: 02/22/09 06:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Good for her.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! More to come tonight! =)
Date: 02/22/09 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1
loved it! i absolutely love ur series... does this mean all of the storeis are going to be rewritten?? update soon
Author's Response: Yes, the entire series is going to be rewritten so it all flows together. =)