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Reviewer: Lionheart Crane Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 09:42 am Title: Chapter 6

Another piece of great literature art at its finest.Rachel is finally on the scene and a veteran worker Sarah shows her the ropes of the business. It's her first day and Kevin Richardson, Howard Dorough, and A.J. Mclean of the legendary pop band, the Backstreet Boys walks in, Rachel falls apart and her friend Kristin doesn't make it any better! This hysterical tale is guaranteed fun and educational for all ages!

Author's Response: This chapter was a lot of fun to write. It shows how human Rachel really is. She's very unique as a person. She tries to blend in with her surroundings, but her colorful personality always seems to stand out and people notice her. It's going to be fun to continue to write her story as the book moves along. Once again, thanks for your awesome review. =)

Reviewer: XredXXtearsX87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/09 02:30 am Title: Chapter 6

Awww i love it. My favorite part had to be when she dumped the tray on AJ. haha that was funny, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: LOL! That part made me chuckle when I wrote it. Since the character Rachel is modeled after myself, I could picture something that embarrassing happening to me. Believe me, she won't be short in the geek factor for a while. LOL!

Reviewer: maybe Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/09 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 6

ok so im assuming from the older version this is the sarah we met at the bookstore but now in edited version shes a waitress with that being said in this version does she still have the douchebag abusive boyfriend

Author's Response: Yes, this is the same Sarah, just a different setting. I felt that this was a better way to introduce her character and make her relationship with Kevin seem much more believable. As for her abusive boyfriend...well, you'll just have to keep reading to find out. LOL!