Date: 10/01/09 08:07 am Title: Chapter 1
very nice story really felt sorry for the girl
Author's Response: First off, thank you for your wonderful review. Yeah, the girl is the one that taking the low punches and we feel the need to feel sorry for her, well don't she is a tough cookie and you will see it on the sequal coming soon! Thanks for reading.
Date: 03/12/09 03:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Awe... I liked it and I so hated the other woman....
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback...yeah home wrecker no ones like them:)
Date: 03/10/09 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was a really great short story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback:)
Date: 03/10/09 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness, I agree. The pain was there, and to be honest, i wanted to slap the other woman too, but I so understood what would have happened! It really is a good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback as I have to be honest I'm very surprise that I'm receiving the same kind of reaction; which, is good because that's what I intended to do when I wrote it...that everyone could feel the same pain and struggle that the character feels...
Date: 03/10/09 12:37 am Title: Chapter 1
A good short piece and the emotions you had weaved throughout were absolutely amazing. Very heart felt. As a reader, you're able to feel the pain of the main character/narrator. Good job on this! [Ashley]
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you...that's exactly I wanted to do as I been feeling lately that I have lost my touch, so I return to my roots-short stories lol!
