Date: 04/03/12 10:52 pm Title: Sorry...
I don't get on to AC very often anymore since I'm now working 2 jobs and all...but when I do, I see this on most recent and get all excited...then this is all I get. *pouts*
Author's Response:
Wow!! I am amazed you got on AC. I really miss seeing you around. Maybe if someday you have the time I can bring this back alive. Jack can't work without his muse :(
Date: 04/02/12 04:59 pm Title: Sorry...
well I got all excited and logged in to review for nothing :( lol.... oh well I never thought you'd actually finish this... sometimes sequels are mistakes I have deleted one completely from here for that reason.
Author's Response:
Oh I know. I suck...and I'm definitely sorry that I did a sequal. I coulda just left Jack the way it was...but what is done is done. Maybe one day I will come back to it, even if it's just for my sake. lol. Thanks Lore.
Date: 08/30/11 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
that last line made me think of the cartoon "Adventure Time" lol. It was kind of awkward to switch all of a sudden to Crystal, I don't mind, might be nice to see the story from her POV, we, the readers, are just so used to seeing it from Jack's POV. If you want to switch back and forth you might want to preface the chapters with whose POV we are getting so we don't have to reread the first few paragraphs to get it. Maybe that was just me. I'm sad I don't get to read more :(
Who is Max?
Date: 08/30/11 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 12
Jenkins sounds dirty. Trying to blame Richardson. I bet Richardson was hiding from Don and Jenkins, probably because he had whatever both of them needed to get the money.
Date: 08/30/11 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
how did it get in his pocket? oh yah Yelina slipped it in there.. when the HELL is he gonna wonder about her??
Date: 08/30/11 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
where did her brother and his mom go? does Don have something to do with their disappearance too?
Date: 08/30/11 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
well of course we knew Don was alive from the end of the first. Did he think he'd get away from the goons? I guess if they thought Alex was dead, but they like to see a body or do the killing themselves so I'm sure Don's goons would've investigated anyway. Jenkins has something fishy going on, perhaps more than bad cop...
Still think Yelina is a plant.
Date: 08/30/11 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh Alex, you know you want her. There is a blond involved and I still think Yelina is involved somehow.
Date: 08/30/11 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 7
"Instead, she was busy driving my car, moving from state to state, taking self defense classes, and buying weapons." - Did i miss when it was explained that is what she was doing?
So now he's not a killer, interesting that he is just trying to turn his life around. What do the cops think of his past life? Will his new cop friends find out he was a hired killer? Well I guess they knew because he's a consultant but they just let him off like that? Maybe he's under some kind of "you have to help us" kind of agreement, like Frank whatever his name is from Catch Me If You Can and White Collar. released from prison but have to aid the government.
Date: 08/30/11 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
uh oh, did Alex not use protection when he had relations with Crystal? oh no it's only been six months, there wouldn't be that... hrm fifth female? Abby lived too??? (of course she did, Nick's jerking her around in JOK ;) )
since all the other guys were killed off in the first story, I'm interested to see what's gonna happen. OH and what about Mrs. L and the kid? Did "Jack" ever visit them after "Tom's" death?
Date: 08/28/11 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ok I know Crystal is out for revenge and she's there but shae'd be looking out for Alex wouldn't she? Hrm
Date: 08/28/11 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
She could still be involved .. could've been looking for it and not finding it so then the big guns come in. Wonder if it was something in his dads deposit box that Yelina knew when he went to open. Crystal is watching him too
Date: 08/28/11 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
Well we know from the end of the first that Don is not dead. I still think Yelina might be part of the watching. Heh. And of course it could be crystal. Pissed off that Alex is with another chick pretending to be dead to her
Date: 08/28/11 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
I know it's Crystal doing the killing... I don't understand Yelina. Is she just some girl he screws or is she a partner in his work. If she's a work partner the shouldn't she always go which leads me to think she's just a sex partner. Perhaps someone placed there by Don to keep an eye on him
Date: 08/28/11 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I would have loved to read this from Crystal' POV. To see her struggle with the revenge and becoming a killer. I am sure from Alex's POV will be just as great though
