Date: 11/14/09 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
Loved what Crystal did to the guy lmao
Date: 11/14/09 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can so hear Alex sayin all this...it"s freaky!
Date: 11/14/09 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Alex a cop!!! I like. He can arrest me any day
Date: 11/13/09 03:33 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh my Jack!!!! Thank God that he's back to me.. us! ops!hehe
my love, THANKS FO THIS!! and for the 10 feet away *hand on my chest* L.O.V.E.D.!!!
Date: 11/12/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
Uh oh....ok he needs to realize he loves her, admit it and make that push him to save her!
Date: 11/12/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMG, Poor Crystal. Okay he's starting to look a little hot to me again. I was begining to think he'd lost his mojo.
Date: 10/10/09 01:58 am Title: Chapter 10
Well damn...it's about time! I even had to go back and read some, to remind myself of where we were! Do you have any idea how much I miss helping you work on Jack?!? *sniffle* Damn I am hating how much I'm workin now!
Jack still sounds like Jack...and his stubborness is getting annoying! You have a voice fucker...use it! GEESH! It's only three little damn words! It's not like you're selling your soul to the flying dutchman or some shit. *shakes head*
I still love the suspense and action, of this story and really hope I don't have to wait so long, for the next update! Miss you girlie!
Author's Response: Hell yeah its about time!! J/K I know you are really busy nowadays. We definately miss brainstorming with our muse. Right Jack? He's a little on the mute side, but he misses ya too. Well I'm glad you are still loving it. I thought I would put in a little lovey dovey moment. Haha! Jack is definately a stubborn ass.Those three words aren't always easy to say! Especially for him.
I miss ya too! Hope you are doing well. I shall be updating soon.
Date: 10/01/09 07:07 am Title: Chapter 10
Yay an update... Awe why can't he just tell her?? lol I am loving this story hope you can update soon.
Author's Response: I didn't even know you were reading this. I'm stoked! Thanks for giving Jack's complicated life story a chance. Thank you hun and I shall update very soon.
Date: 09/30/09 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hey there! Awesome so far, looking forward to more. Well written
Author's Response: Hey Tracy I didn't even know you were reading! Woot that's exciting. I hope you keep up with Jack! Thank you love!
Date: 09/30/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 10
aw so glad for the update! it was reallly good. poor jack keeps getting so beat up though. cute ending and the format looked fine!
Author's Response: Yay so glad you are still interested in Jack. Hahaha yeah poor Jack gets beat up at least once a chapter. LOL! Yay I'm glad it posted good. Thank you Mary!
Date: 09/15/09 02:41 am Title: Chapter 9
Erika....girl....so I am all caught up....I am still loving this story.
I did notice something about your writing though....YOU USE COMMAS like CRAZY!!!!!!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 09/13/09 01:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Any idea when this story will be updated? Anyone??
Date: 08/05/09 02:01 am Title: Chapter 9
Ok I know...I know...I've been absolutely horrible at remembering to review. But...here goes...
DON'S ALIVE?!?!?! (Ok, so I already knew this, but you can't blame me for hoping you might change it around a little) Crystal knew about this...why the FUCK wouldn't she tell Jacklex from the start?!? I mean, sure I can understand her being afraid of his reaction, but it's not like it's her fault! GAH! Why won't this Don fucker die? I mean what does a person have to do? Now that Jacklex is aware of this, maybe he'll be able to hunt his ass down and really knock him off!
I'm still glad that Jacklex is showing more emotions and losing more of the Jack side, while he gets in touch with his Alex side...although we'll always call him Jack from time, to time!
The openind scene tugged at my heart. I can see both sides, here. He really has to work at proving himself, if he ever wants a chance at truely being with Crys. She went through a lot, when he left, and I can only imagine the pain she has had to deal with. Of course, as a man, he doesn't really see that...otherwise why would his thoughts have immediately drifted to the time they were together, intimately? He's got to realize that she's a sensative person, and she just doesn't want to experience the pain of him bailing out, on her, again. I'm holding hope that he will find a way to prove himself, to her. That he will admit his feelings and that they will be able to be together.
You know I absolutely love this story. Even in times like this, when I help out a lot or contribute to the scenes...when I read the chapters, I always feel like I am watching a movie, or seeing it play out in real life. I love your writing, I love jack, and I love you too girlie! Please update soon!
Date: 07/22/09 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
great chapter. but i really don't like yelina. can she go away?
Date: 07/21/09 02:56 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh...my God. WTF! Kill Don!
