Date: 07/03/09 11:11 am Title: Chapter 8
Ahh! Love it! Need...more...Jacklex (or Jalex...whatever)!!! :)
Date: 07/01/09 05:12 am Title: Chapter 8
yeah that did suck for Crystal. wow at least we finally know what he wants. cant wait for more. great update
Date: 07/01/09 04:43 am Title: Chapter 8
AJsutiepie...it will be her last update for a while because she isn't going to have internet for a little while...hopefully it won't be too long tho.
Date: 07/01/09 04:12 am Title: Chapter 8
and why is this the last update for awhile? How long?
Date: 07/01/09 04:11 am Title: Chapter 8
I am willing to put money on it that Yelina is the person trying to get him killed. Holy shit! Crystal better be toughened up!
Date: 07/01/09 04:08 am Title: Chapter 8
OMFG!!! I nearly fell out of my chair, when I saw this update! You just made my entire night!
I can't believe after all this, that Jack never even had what they were demanding! How the hell could Jenkins be holding something like that? He actually stole that shit, from the evidence stuff? That's just plain INSANE! I want to deck that fucker in the mouth, right about now! How could he put himself, his family, and others in danger, like that? The stupid fucker!
Now what is with Jacklex accussing Crys, like that? He should know better, than that! He knows how much she loves him! Then he made her strip?!? UGH! Jacklex...seriously?!? I liked how she did it, though...throwing her clothes at him, and getting all snippy. I think I would have been tearing, too.
I thought it was oh sooooo smooth how he then laid the mack down, on her. Isn't that just like a man...ok...maybe not all men, but it sure IS like Jack...make her strip down to nothing, because you don't trust her, and then decide you want to suck face? I can't imagine what is going on, in her head, right about now! It has to be a total mix of emotions...hurt, offended, pissed, but yet relishing in the kiss. *sigh* Oh, to kiss Jack! LOL.
There weren't too many typos or anything, so you were pretty good there. I still completely LOVE the story and Jack. I miss you and Jacklex...I'm so bummed that all your stuff is getting cut off, it's SO not fair! I was hoping you'd be able to still get on Twitter or something.
Anyways...I'm sad that you can't update for a while, but am SO hoping it's sooner that you expect. You are an amazing writer and I love reading your stories, espescially SD and UD!! Keep writing, while you're disconnected, so you can UPDATE as soon as you get the net back!
P.S. I was all happy about being the first to review, but after getting longwinded, I don't know that I'll still be the first, lmao.
Date: 06/25/09 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Loving the action and glad he's got Crystal back in his life. As for letting that fucker go, omg, the old Jack would've blown his brains out! But I guess he wants to get away from the old ways now that he's Alex.
Sorry I didn't review before, I read it in work ages ago but I wasn't logged in, so when I tried to review it wouldn't let me and then I forgot until now.
Date: 06/15/09 12:07 am Title: Chapter 7
Ok so after reading sinister devotion and now I've caught up with this one...I have to give you two thumbs up...oh and I need more...
Author's Response:
*Squee again* I'm so glad that you are reading, I hope that you like this one, just as much as SD. Thanks for the two thumbs up *wide grin* there shall be more very soon. Thanks again!
Date: 06/12/09 08:18 am Title: Chapter 7
Loving the action! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Awesomeness, I have to reread over and over to make sure it sounds action-y! lol!! there is more ver soon. Thanks you Naomi!
Date: 06/09/09 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aw softie Alex LOL
Author's Response: LOL!! Yeah, he's definately trying to be a different person. lol! Maybe not for long though. Thank you girl!
Date: 06/09/09 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Author's Response: It's about damn time you caught up!! Just kidding, yay I'm glad that you are all caught up girl. Well Brandy started calling him Jacklex and well it stuck...it would be weird to call him Jalex now. lmao!!! Gracias LA!
Date: 06/09/09 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
LMFAO...it's so good that you didn't go with my ideas! *cracks up* But I liked that you still used the part about him covering his junk, it was great! I cracked up just as much as when I came up with it...I liked your scenario, of how it happened, better than mine tho. I think the chapter came out well...as always, I was sitting on the edge of my seat, wondering how Jacklex was going to get them out of it. Update again soon, please!
Author's Response: Well I did kinda used some of your idea. Haha Yeah the covering his junk, really made me laugh. Haha...well actually Crystal kinda saved his ass. I shall update very soon. You'll be the first to know member. lol!!
Date: 06/07/09 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
Loving it! I need more!!
Author's Response: Oh yeah I'm so glad that you are liking the sequal. There is so much more to happen. Thank you girl!
Date: 05/27/09 11:51 am Title: Chapter 6
Exciting chapter, I knew the blonde had to be Crystal, but why did she stay away so long and what's she been up to? I wonder who the guy on the phone is and what he wants?
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Haha I love to read about your questions, they always inspire me for the next chapter. You are gonna be surprised for what I have in store. lol. Thank you Steph for keeping up with Jack.
Date: 05/24/09 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
{Leigh-Anna
Author's Response: I know, right! you guys were dying for that to happen, well there it is. and they have a lot of animosity going on, especially with Yelina in the picture. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I can't wait to read your reaction for the surprises I have in store. I'm updating very soon. Thank you LA!
