Date: 05/21/09 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
That last line is making me think his mom may still be alive. So glad he and Crystal finally bumped into each other again! Can't wait for more! Don't make us wait as long LOL.
Author's Response: Hey that's a great guess, he will find out very soon. Yeah, it was time for them to find each other, although it's not that peachy right about now. Poor Jack with two women. lol! Updating really soon. Thank you girl...I'll try and hurry. lol!
Date: 05/05/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hmm, I'm wondering who this mysterious blonde it too, would Crystal really be doing all this? Can't wait for more :)
Date: 05/02/09 04:53 am Title: Chapter 5
DAMN...it's just one thing right after another, for poos Alex, isn't it?!? I kinda feel bad for Yelina, still...seeing as it's not her fault and all. I wonder what is going on, with the blond...I can't imagine Crys as a killer, UNLESS she has a really damn good reason! Maybe it IS her and she DOES have a good reason? I just know there is something going on, that is WAAAAAAAY bigger than Jacklex expects! I can't wait for the next chapter...things are really starting to build up and get good...not that Jacklex was ever NOT good, but you know what I mean. LOL. So yeah...UPDATE soon, and don't let my man be hurt TOO badly, in that accident you left off with.
Date: 05/01/09 03:55 am Title: Chapter 5
when's he gonna meet up with her?
Date: 05/01/09 02:46 am Title: Chapter 5
I have a feeling these people she's killing ARE bad people...maybe she killed the people that originally threatened Alex in the first place?
Date: 04/20/09 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
God fucking damnit I'm hooked on Jalex all over again!! Even more this time!! Grr!! Great chap girl! But I'm like WTF, is Crys after Jack now? Holy crow! Cant wait to see how this plays out!! UPDATE soon! :)
{Leigh-Anna}
Date: 04/20/09 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
What on earth do these people want with Jacklex? Who are they? I can't wait to find out! Poor Yelina though, getting beat like that. As for the woman in the bar, it has to by Crystal...but why didn't she say something to him? So much suspense, I can't wait for more!
Date: 04/19/09 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Holy shit. WTF is going on! Update soon!
Date: 04/19/09 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMFG! That came out awesome, Erika! I didn't think you would get it finished, after I left last night! I thought you were going to bed, too. Oh...wait...Jacklex was probably snoring so loud that you couldn't sleep, huh? LOL. He got the action, though!
What do they want? It's sad that Yelina got hurt, so badly! Poor girl...and she doesn't even know what the hell, is going on! Why are the the bad guys always such assholes?
Date: 04/19/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
ahh who is it?
crapp poor yelina cant wait for more!
Date: 04/19/09 12:05 am Title: Chapter 2
Okay, I am half way caught up and all the way in love with this already!! Jack as a cop? Hm, thats something I'll have to get used to...but I do love a man in uniform! Keep it up! This is really great! :)
Date: 04/18/09 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hot damn! What the hell?!? First they are being followed and then he walks in, finding the house in shambles? I would be fucking PISSED OFF...and as everyone knows...things that piss normal people off, REAAAAAALLY piss Jacklex off!!!
Looks like his past has caught up to him! That, definitely, can't be good! Sure, I'm lucky enough to know what's going on, who, and why, but it's still like WTF?!? So often, in life, things don't turn out to be what they seem, and it really can throw you for a loop!
I'm biting my nails, now, because it is obvious that someone wants something, from him! Poor Yelina, is in the mix, too, and so they are both in danger. I sure hope they are able to avoid getting hurt, or worse! (Yes, Jacklex, I mean her too!) We know that his past is a dark one, and anyone from his past showing up, is bad. I don't think any of them did all that, just to give him a birthday card and a hug!
Here is where we start seeing the action, again! I'm both excited and nervous...with a hint of anxiousness. I need to know what's going on and what's going to happen! Preferably NOW WOMAN!!! Love ya, girl!
P.S. - Sorry it took so long, to review, Jacklex...you know I could never forget you! LOVE YOU.
Date: 04/18/09 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jacklex and the beach?!? Now I've seen everything! His life has drastically changed, hasn't it? I see that even as he gets intimate...well, as intimate as he gets...with Yelina, he's still thinking of Crys. I can't imagine how hard it would be, to be in that situation. Now he's seeing and hearing things, too? Man, my nerves would be on edge, BIG TIME! It's kind of good that he has the 6th sense, when it comes to his surroundings. He's sensitive to everything around him and I have a feeling that it will come in handy awfully soon!
Date: 04/17/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
wtf, ok why is Crystal AFTER Jack? I'm so confused. Unless that other chick staged her death too in the prequel.
Date: 04/17/09 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am so in love with Jacklex, that he makes my obession with Emmett and James from Twilight look like a school girl crush.....Glad you are up and running again!
