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Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

when's he gonna gind Crystal? When she gonna find him??

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wonder who it is and what they are after?  Still loving Jacklex :)

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh yea....I did forget to mention that even though it wasn't what I expected.....I still love it.......And Jacklex (will forever be a tiny bit of Jack there no matter what he says) still gets me all antsy in my pantsy.......

Author's Response: Yay I'm glad that you still love it,, but I will definatley use your suggestion. Aw, I know what you mean. OMFG (antsy in your pantsy) freakin funny!

Reviewer: brandy_d Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 2

Okay, so sorry it took me a while to finish SD, I had one of the leads in my schools theatre production and things were hectic for a while....

So UD...well, I am beyond thrilled that you decided to do a sequel, however, it isn't what I thought it would be.

I was expecting it to be from Crystals POV. Now I am thinking that Crys is the one watching Alex, and she probably is feeling crushed that he appears to have moved on with Yelina so fast.....

Plus, I really wanted to see a bad ass Crystal....

So you ask if there is anything I would like to see then my answer is....I would love a chapter here and there from Crystals POV....

Much Love Erika....



Author's Response:

Woot for having a lead!!! I'm glad you are thrilled, I did think about doing it from her point of view, but then I thought there is so much, that Jacklex needs to go through. It could be here, or anybody else.

Wow...I hadn't thought about that, I just could throw in a her POV!! That's an excellent idea...hum...see why I missed ya! lol! Thank you Brandy glad you are back!

Reviewer: AJsCuTiePiE93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

This chapter is sorta posted twice. Just wanted you to know. It has it posted twice but the second times it's not there. I can't explain it you'll have to look LOL. I loved it. OMG you're leaving the door WIDE open if you want me to tell you what I want outta this story LOL. Well, maybe since he's already paranoid someone is after him, he can worry internally about Crystal? Or something.

Author's Response: OOOOO!! That is so weird, I checked it out last night and it wasn't...lmao! Thanks for letting me know. Yay I'm glad you loved it. Well your opinion is important to me, so I want to make sure I cover the right gaps...lmao! Nice, thanks for the suggestions...I like that idea...!! Thank you! 

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

A day at the beach, that sounds lovely and not something Alex would've done when he was Jack.  I wonder who's watching though, it there is anybody actually watching.  And who's this mysterious hitman?  Looking forward to more, you are doing a great job of this sequel Erika, can't think what else I'd like to see, apart from a reunion with Crystal :)

Author's Response: I know, right! That's a miracle, some clues will be coming back soon. I promise. Yay I'm glad that you are intrigued with the story, I hope you are just as into it...as SD! Oh there will be a reunion at some point I promise. Thank you steph!

Reviewer: BSB-Chick-101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/09 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay girl! I must say you have me hooked already and I was quite impressed when I read he was working for the police now! BUT! Where's Crys? UPDATE SOON GIRL!!!

Author's Response: Yay for being hooked to Jacklex (as Brandy calls him) Oh yeah, he helps out the cops, now, not exactly in the field, but he's there. lol humm where is Crystal? lol!! Thank you LA!

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/09 05:42 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm a bit tired, after our long ass trip, to leave a long ass review, tonight. LOL. But I will say the chapter came out VERY well and that I still have love for Ja...I mean Alex!*grin* I'm looking forward to the next chapter...I hope it will be up soon!

Author's Response: Aw I knew you were tired that day...and I love all your reviews no matter what. Haha...I still have the name issue too, I'm so used to Jack, it's weird. T/hank you. love ya!

Reviewer: AJsCuTiePiE93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/09 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

UGH ok they're both thinking of each other so they need to find each other. And am I the only one who thinks that Crystal killed that guy? It was too professional not to...

Author's Response:

Aw I know, I'm not sure how soon they will, but they will. As for Crystal being the one who killed it could be, cause she's an angry woman. Thank you girl!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/09 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what a turnaround, working for the police now!  He is perfect for that job.  Wonder where Crystal is though?  Will he ever see her again?  Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Author's Response: Yeah, he helps them out!! I wonder where that woman is too. hum...I'm not sure if he will see her again...lmao! Thank you so much Steph.

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/09 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you KRystle!

Reviewer: BSB-Chick-101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/09 03:05 pm Title: Prologue

Wow, Erika I really like this, nice twist you added onto it!! :) I cannot wait to see where this goes!! :D UPDATE SOON!! You have me excited!! :) xoxo

Author's Response:

Why thank you love, I was hoping you would. Oh it's gonna be quite a ride, and your going to love and hate Alex too. lmao! I'm happy you are excited, so am I. Woot, Thank you LA!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sapphire Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/09 12:27 pm Title: Prologue

great a sequel!!! can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Yes it is!!! I hope you likie...Thank you Krystle!

Reviewer: Carter-Orange Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/09 10:04 am Title: Prologue

OMG wow, I am soooo glad you are doing a sequel.  I'm hooked on this story already.  So Jack is gone and he's making a fresh start as Alex, I like it!  Can't wait to see what happens next :)

Author's Response: Yay...I'm a little scared about it, I want it to be just as good, but I'm glad that you are hooked already. I have a bunch of surprises for you guys. Yes, *pouts* Jack is gone...I will miss his grumpy ass! LOL! Thank you Steph.

Reviewer: alota_cookin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/09 04:40 am Title: Prologue

*dances around screaming* I knew I could talk you into posting this sequel! I am so happy and excited...it's going to be great! *MUAH* We'll have to get crackin on the next chapter, right away!

Author's Response: You are too funny woman. Thanks for helping me out with this. I'm excited too. woot for Jack...damn it, I mean Alex. Thanks love!