Date: 02/12/10 06:40 am Title: Chapter 32
awwwww that is so cute of Nick
Date: 02/11/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter 41
You know I started reading yesterday, and I just finished.
While reading I did get a little confused/lost in a few areas. I think it's because there were a few transitions that were a tad choppy. These spots weren't bad, but could have used just a little extra something to make things flow smoother.
As far as characters, I feel that you have developed Nick's character more than any of the others. This may just be a personal preference, but I would have liked to see Amanda, and maybe a few other characters, developed a little more.
Overall, the story is cute. I didn't see many spelling or grammar errors and although a bit cliche, you put some interesting twists to the story line. I can tell you have fun writing it, and that's the most important thing because it helps the readers become more interested.
So...with that said...WRITE ON SISTA! And keep having fun with it! I'll watch for the next update!
Author's Response:
Awww thank you so much Krystal!! Now my response is gonna be a bit long lol. Nick is the main character, so I have his personality and everything developed a lot more. Now the reason for Amanda not being as developed is because I am planning on writing a prequel to this story....Amanda is going to be featured more. I will try to put more of the others in there as the story goes. I got a lot planned for this one, so don't worry. I will try to explain everything. I really appreciate that you read this and gave me a detailed review because most people don't. Reviews actually help me a lot, and this is the first romance I have ever written, so I could really use people's feedback. Thanks for reading! ;)
Date: 02/10/10 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 41
WOW that gr8 that Nick and Amanda is together hehe, so this is the time we get to meet her
Date: 02/06/10 01:59 am Title: Chapter 40
he better move his ass. cant wait for more.
Author's Response: LOL I know, right? Nick needs to act now if he wants any chance with her. Thanks for always reviewing! I love getting reviews!
Date: 02/03/10 05:55 am Title: Chapter 39
Wished she would've smacked him LOL :-p glad he got a new manager...and REALLY love the last line. Can't wait to read more
Date: 02/02/10 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 39
cant wait for more. awesome job.
Date: 02/02/10 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 39
This story gets better everytime hun!
Date: 02/01/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 38
Go Nick Go Nick she gets what she deserves, lol @ her if they dont really married she can not getting anything from him x bet she will along with his mum and that its said did not know it was his bday
Date: 01/29/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 38
hehe awesome job. way too funny she is finally getting what she deserves
Date: 01/27/10 07:55 am Title: Chapter 37
oh my
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/23/10 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 35
loves it another gr8 up night
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!!
Date: 01/23/10 06:14 am Title: Chapter 35
hehe awesome job
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I love star wars as you can tell. It just seemed to fit cause Brian's favorite movie is Star Wars. Nick was there for him as a best friend should be. Thanks for reviewing! :D
Date: 01/20/10 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 34
Awwww poor Brian...Amanda was so mean!The way she told him.
Author's Response: Well, Amanda was not in love with Brian, so it had to be done. Its better to tell the person than to string them along. Plus, her heart wasn't really into the relationship. Sometimes it works out, sometimes it doesn't. Brian will be okay don't worry.
Date: 01/20/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 34
awesome job
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading!!! And thanks for the review! I really enjoy getting them
