Date: 08/24/09 07:07 am Title: Unbuttoned
aww, as if anything you write could suck? I am excited I finally got to finish thisone! And I'll tell you, I'll never look at Abby and Tony's relationship quite the same way again. lol. I loved McGee's presence in this one. I'm sure whoever you wrote this for will love it! It's rather hot actually. For some reason that surprised me coming from you. Nicely done. LOL I read this and then think about what I came up with and yeah, like I said, you can put me to shame anyday. I finished mine that night but then forgot to post it until I saw this one posted, so it's there now if you're curious. It sucks, but I'm all out of whack right now. I did have fun though, so thanks. I'm loving your NCIS stuff! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Well, you know me, I'm a complete neurotic when it comes to my writing...or just about anything *face-palm*. Thanks for helping me get unstuck (erm. no pun intended) on this one! As for the "hot" thing...I think that surprised a few of the other people who are familiar with my writing, too. Ah well. I've really been trying to challenge myself lately to write things I wouldn't normally write, so...success? LOL
(Sorry to hear you're all 'out of whack'! And stop selling yourself short! I know pot meet kettle, but hey...) Looking forward to reading what you came up with! =)
Date: 08/23/09 04:44 am Title: Unbuttoned
Aww lol this was really entertaining. Abby is adorable on the show and you portrayed it really well in your fic. I enjoyed it. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! I adore Abby. Despite the fact I probably identify a bit better with Tony, she's got to be my absolute favorite character on television. lol. Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for taking the time to comment!
Date: 08/23/09 02:50 am Title: Unbuttoned
Haha that was awesome. I love how you bring out the characters...especially Dinozzo! It was funny and sexy. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to comment! Glad you enjoyed it! =)
Date: 08/22/09 08:00 pm Title: Unbuttoned
Very well done Ash. I read it as if I was beta-ing and didn't catch anything. It was very visual and of course your dialogue and first person narrative were both spot on. Great job! I just watched an old episode where Abby and Jimmy get stuck together lol You really do a great job of capturing their personalities. It's one of your greatest strengths as a fanfic writer!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mare! I really appreciate the beta-ing! And the calming of my neurosis! ;)
Date: 08/22/09 06:09 pm Title: Unbuttoned
That was HILARIOUS and so damn sexy at the same time. I can see this happening to Tony and Abby... there needs to be more stories like this! I'm slowly making my way there, haha. The lucky winner of this story is going to love it.
Gotta love Gibbs dry humor. And yes... it's McGee's fault. =)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! (And I agree, there needs to be more NCIS fics. Looking forward to more of yours *HINT* :P ) And of COURSE it's McGee's fault! =D